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for Beautiful Miscommunications

by nena

schedule March 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hi again! well in just over 24 hours i have read all of your stories and I love all of them. This was a great story and you make all of the stories very believable. I hope you write more stories like these soon.
person The Empress
schedule August 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
LOVED IT.! I so thought that boy and girl was kags and miro but hten I thought, naw, it couldn't be. They are too nice and holy. You kept me guessing at the plot twists. Great on ya. You never lost track because of the many turns and loops. I swear if this was a rollercoster I would have heaved by now...lol But I LOVED the story. Congrats. You definatedly developed your characters well. *Throws brownies at author and betas* Free brownies for all!!
Empress
person Kags
schedule October 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hey just to say theres a prob with chapter 10:( like theres a missing scene or sumthing ie--> *-*-*-*-*

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im gonna read on cause i cant stop but i hate to miss out so like hopefully u'll add whatever was missing
person Snowfall
schedule October 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Just wanted to let you know that this is one of those fics that I have read more than once and will probably read again...like right now. ^_^

Snow
person Snowfall
schedule August 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ach! I missed two chapters! *gasps* You scared me there for a minute, pretending to be ending the story. Bad author, bad author! Great battle scene. Adding Kagome's father to the mix was great. The end of the chapter is quite baffling. Heheh...the mile high club. I like how you have stuck close to the original series concerning all of the characters. It annoys some people, but I truly enjoy it. Is Kagura going to be alright? Please say that she will. That whole thing with her and Sesshoumaru is just so romantic. If you kill her off, I'll be really upset. *pouts* Overall, this has been a great fic. I love mystery, intrigue and action. And on top of all that, the wonderful lemons. I can't wait to see how you end it. On a side note, Kagura and Sesshoumaru's sex life is something to envy. Whew! Turn on the A/C!

Snow
person rita
schedule June 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
YOU MUST UPDATE!!!! ive patiently waiting for a year and still no update. .........
...... i know your really busy or must be having writers block but it just makes me feel better to demand an update.
and if that sentence made no sense at all..dont worry, im in the same boat.
person Ikiwi
schedule January 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Woo hoo! Another amazing chapter. Keep it up; the story just keeps getting better and better. I'm in love with it.. try to update again ASAP too, but no pressure of course!
- Ikiwi, eagerly anticipating the next chapter!
person TricksterGoddess
schedule October 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was an awesome chapter^^ Let me guess, the Shikon no Tama is inside of Kagome... Please update soon and keep up the good work^__^!!!
schedule October 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
by the gods...i think i got it!!! 524663....it's a locker combo! am i right, am i right? ::lmao:: i jus sat down to check my messages before going to work and i glimpsed at the scratch pad i had written all of the attempts to figure this out on and read the numbers in sets. then it dawned on me. it's my best guess...can't wait for you to update!
person anonymous
schedule October 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
524663 translates to kagome, doesnt it? from on a phone. anyway i love your story, the detail, your potrayal of the charaters. awesome.