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My sister ann has given you an excuse of why we both don't have an email address so I just wanted to say your story was wonderful and just like my sister ann it had passion and great love ans sad details to it but it was o so great your a good writer keep it up ok because this story was so well if I have to say it again Great!!!!!!!!

So the Thunder Brothers are dead. One battle won. But the real enemy of course, is still out there.

Hello dearie!
Glad to see an update...and actually for me, it looks like I had 2 chapters to catch up on. Although you wrote it well, I've got to say "ick" to the Naraku-Kikyo lemon. And that's purely cuz I don't like those two :) I'm glad that Naraku is on his way to becoming evil...or ridiculously obsessed with Kagome. I think I've been brainwashed by "fanon" long enough now that I'm suspicious of a "good" Naraku. At any rate...nice action scene involving the Thunder Bros. I'm waiting for Inu-Kag lemony goodness :)

Have a terrific and safe New Year!

Very good story! Your plot and characters are very true to form and thought. I like what you have done to Nakuru. i think him as not the bad guy but just a gray character is very intesting and well thought out. Up-date soon!

wow. I thought that was a very good sex scene. How can you say you are not good at them? I am still enthralled by your story. I don't get to read them one by one. I usually just check like once a month and read a bunch at a time. Your story keeps me coming back to find out whats going to happen next. Thank you

Nice work. :D

Nope, didn't affect my impression of him too much...after all, Naraku was distracted while he was attacked. I still like him. And I'm really glad you didn't kill him - if you had, I would've been upset. :) So, the Thunder Brothers are involved now...that ought to be interesting.

This is a pretty cool story, but you need just a teensy bit more on action. I mean, dude, if I wanted human emotions or anything, I'll just turn my body inside-out and examine the results. Ha ha, just joking. You are good on emotions, but, as you said, you're not good with "lemon" (empasis on lemon). Besides, why don't you just put a half-way bed scene for the sickos near the end of the story and leave the rest to their twisted "imaginations"? (i'm not even going to say anything about that) That way, you aren't really disappointing them, just making them think, and you can rest in peace and just think about your other story. Maybe you can put in another fighting scene, either spiritual or real, both ways are good with me. Although I did like the real one. Keep up the good work and put up a chapter as fast as you can, if you won't mind so much.

As for now, I bid you, adieu. *curtsies, and then disappears into the shadows...*

It wouldn't let me log in. *pout* Anyhoo, I love this story. It is among my few fave fics at the moment. It is a very enjoyable read, though Kikyo's character has created a rage in me that demands her blood. *grin* GOOD JOB!

Uh-oh...what is she going to do next? I love the dream bit, that's quite a show of power there...And the best villains are always those that believe they are in the right...