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tell all please update

this is great please update soon

hey, i get to be your first review! good story so far, i really like the interaction between the two characters... a few grammatical errors, nothing really distracting but you might want to get a beta reader just to help the story flow a bit better. but i'd really like to read more and see what develops between kagome and inuyasha, i'm glad you kept him so in character. and the descriptions of his doggy behavior are very cute! helps lighten things up a bit after such a dark beginning... anyway, i hope to read more, so please update soon!

aww....Inuyasha is *so* sweet to Kagome and your story is rad....I can't wait until you update! till next time cheers

I'm glad the review buttons are working again, I wanted to review in earlier chaps, but found I couldn't! @_@ Anyway, juannaanna say I love your story, especially Inuyasha's character... so Inuyasha!!! mmmhhh.... so who would this intruding human be?? planning on adding more characters into the plot? that could be nice, I wouldn't want it to end too soon ^_^

Hope to hear more from you soon, greetings from Spain!!!

I like this story, I like the concept, it is different, you are making it work well.

This is getting good plz update really soon!!

This is a nice, dark fic, but I'm wondering--is Naraku going to be brought into this, or will this only be Inu/Kag? Anyway, love the tone so far and hope you update soon!

pLZ update soon I like this story so far its cute lol.