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for Prisoner

by Ramichan

person Rawben
schedule November 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
this is a great story! you have to update again soon! i need more!
person Master Josephine
schedule November 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
another awesome chapter! enter Sango and Miroku! Yay! are they gonna be together? cuz' that would be cool but be sure not to take the attention of Inu and Kag ~_^
and about working together to get over our twenty-pages-for-one-day-syndrome woudl be fun but i think i'm beyond being cured! haha! but hey you're a pro and maybe you can help me! i'll do my best for you too! haha! well keep it up! ill be checkin' for new chapters! see ya!
person Jen
schedule November 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey!!! Just finished reading the 12 chapter and You already know my reply. I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!! And i see that you using my nickname. Jenjen. It;s cool i really don't mind being called that. I get called that all the time. Anyway on with the review. I love it and i can't wait to read more. Post more soon and let me know when you do. When you get to read it my story will still be there in fact Angelic rebel is posting the second part and then i am working on the third part which is a lemon heehee. Much love to you Hugsandkissess
person Midnight_Sparrow
schedule November 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ah, I was wondering if Sango and Miroku would be introduced....is there a possibility of Shippou entering as well, then?
person MySecretsOut
schedule November 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
lovely! simply rad but what do you mean Naraku's on the loose?!?! that's never a good thing anyways I can't wait for you to update again!
person amanda
schedule November 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
another great chapter, bravo. i was sad that you didnt update for a while :( im loving the incorporation of all the characters. great job, please update soon:)
person Master Josephine
schedule November 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love your fic!! It's way cool and it's one of the best I've read for quite awhile! Be sure to keep at it cuz' I think it's great! I'd so write a fic if I could but I write like 20 pages for ONE DAY in the story! *smacks self on the head* jeesh and I have great ideas too! Damn it all. HAHA oh well! you should e-mail meetimetime!
person Sess_2005
schedule November 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
good story. i almost wanted to go beat up some bastard for abusing his wife. even though i don't know anyone.
person Jen
schedule November 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I found it, i found it. I was lookin for your story for the last day and a half. But i found it and read the last chapters i was missing. Love them, Love them!!!! Can't wait to read more, you must post more soon. I need to see what happens!!!
person Koniko-chan
schedule November 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow I am in aww that was a great story so far I really felt for Kagome and I'm actious to hear moe of this Inuyashas story great job hope to see more soon keep up the great work