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August 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It's about time they started getting along... Anyway, update soon! ^ ^
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August 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
so .. i read 14 chapters in one night and i can´t help but feel a little empty now that there are still many chapters to come. you know, i have read many ff´s, good and bad and this one is a very good one. even if there are a few errors i don´t care because the story itself is so sweet and wonderfully written. you said you lost your interesst into it?! .. i know that feeling, but if i were you i would think about it again, at least i do it when it happens to me. think about what inspired you, maybe if there are similar stories and new ideas. because its always better if you have the feeling for the story, then you can even enjoy the reviews more^^
ok .. so sry, but i have a habit of writing long reviews even with my bad english, hopefully you understand at least half of what i mean
pls update quickly!!!!!!!
bYe ;-)
ok .. so sry, but i have a habit of writing long reviews even with my bad english, hopefully you understand at least half of what i mean
pls update quickly!!!!!!!
bYe ;-)
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July 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awwwww!! The ending was cute^_^ Keep up the good work!!
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July 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
interesting!!! very well put together. i love the charactesr. i was a little lsot in the begining, because it seeemd to rotate from teh past to the present adn back again. the use of stoves, pancakes and plumbing then castles threw me but hell, it fits. you have taken the story and really put a different edge on it. i was shocked to shit to find Naraku had been exiled. i'm gald though; most stories really come up with some lame plot about a kingdom feeling bad for teh bad guy and just leting him take over. this is a lot more believeable!!!! i love teh story, really! it's so well done. poor kagome...damn, Naraku has to die!!! you really threw together a wonderful batch of your own stuff mixed in with the canon characters. everything fits!!! very well done indeed!!!!
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February 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
UPPPDAAAATTTEEE PLEASE??
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February 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
(on the off chance this gets too long and the site wont show the whole thing, ill send you a copy in an email)I've been reading this for a while, but ive only just gotten around to reviewing (sorreh bout that ^^;; ). anyway, it's interesting how youve combined aspects of medievel european and Fuedal Era Japanese culture (and im guessing later on...myths?) in this story, yet at the same time, thrown in bits and pieces of modern americana.
on a different note, do i see a climax of the story on the horizon? or is it just me? =P
good story, keep up the good work, blah blah blah....
oh yeah, and try to proof-read a little more, kay? you got some doozies in there for grammatical errors and such
on a different note, do i see a climax of the story on the horizon? or is it just me? =P
good story, keep up the good work, blah blah blah....
oh yeah, and try to proof-read a little more, kay? you got some doozies in there for grammatical errors and such
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January 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
dude!!! this story is so good. really good plot. um, how long does it take for you to update? i just started reading this today.. okay. woo. cant wait for the next chapter to post.
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January 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is great please update
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December 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really like this fic, I have been waiting for this update. Can't wait for another and another..... Do you know how long this will be, or have you thaought that far ahead. Some people are just on the spot writers and don't know where things are going, and some peole plan ahead. Which are you?
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December 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ya know, if InuYasha falls asleep in Kagome's room, Miroku and Sanga may get an incorrect idea of just how close those two are....