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for Mail-order Bride

by angelstar

person Skoo
schedule November 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Heh, I know where this is going ^^ Great background so far, please update soon!
person Sueric
schedule November 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
LoL! Cute! I like that prologue! Well written and intriguing, I hope there's more to this story than the prologue! This is a great start, and I hope you are able to add more soon! After I read your prologue, I looked at your user name . . . are you the Angelstars from MMorg? LoL! Small world, yes? Anyway, keep up the great work, and I'm looking forward to reading more!


Sueric
person A Flower-sama
schedule October 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow, it's about time the review system got back up, it was down for about a week. I'm not sure if my last review went through, so I just wanted to say "great story!" and I look foreward to another chappy! It's a very innovative i A F