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for Mail-order Bride

by angelstar

person luckyducky7too
schedule July 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great story! Please update soon.
person jodibetz
schedule July 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Man, that was one long hiatus! And much too short for a come back chapter. I hope you're here to stay and finish the story.
person jhg
schedule May 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great fic and i just found it please update soon
person KrazyKilala [not signed in]
schedule February 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I, actually, really like this story, and I'm not one for AU's [besides Possession.] It's originally and funny, and you keept the basic amount of characters, although they're no Shippou or Kirara. -'_'- I'm glad it's not an OC fanfiction, HATE those! Also, there is a website called mailorderbride.com. It's a website for woman who want to leave the country. Say, like a woman in Iraq wants to leave the country, but can't without a reason why. Her reason would be she is getting married to an American, and, TADA they let her go. But she has to get married to him so she can get a greencard, you see? Anyways, like the story, although you might want to search for a different style of writing! Adios!
schedule February 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like it, so far. Can't wait to read the next part.
person Cutie Pie Hentai *not logged in*
schedule February 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ok, just because I was curious, I typed in www.mailorderbride.com. Guess what? There is a site...LOL...thought you mind find that interesting....
person narria
schedule January 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
please write next chapter soon... this story is really great!
person mian
schedule January 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
plssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss update
person Sky
schedule November 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I like it so far. I can't wait to read more. Update soon
person Chokoreto
schedule November 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
NICE!! great start! your story really give a hook on it.anyways i wonder whats gunna happen next! update soon!!