AFF Fiction Portal

rate_review Reviews

for Credits for the Heart

by Mirokuslave

schedule December 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Naraku was stalking her from day one! He tried to rape her! Knowing Naraku...he probably hid it in his bag of a jacket. I try to leave some open space for my readers imaginations to run wild abit...hehehe

Foreshadow- Coming soon

What will happen when Sango is under the care of Miroku until she is back on her feet and healed?
Will Sango return to school after what happened or will she run away once more?
Can Miroku truely stay to his vow of affection or will another pretty face steal some of his attentions?
schedule December 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
So, how is it so far? I want to read some reviews before I start the next chapter!
schedule December 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Some one finally caught Sango! Yes, Sango is lying to Miroku about her past but you will have to wait for the new chapter to find out why!
schedule December 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Preview for the next Chapter...

What will happen when the others at school find out about Sango and Miroku's little relationship?
Why is Sango lying about her past and family? Is she trying to protect Miroku from the truth or is there more to it than she can keep track of???
What will Naraku do next? Will he let everything slide as he slinks back into the shadow to watch or will he finally grow a backone?

Stay tuned for more from Credits of the Heart!
person T
schedule November 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
In chapter 4, Sango says “You must be lonely…My Mom died when my brother was very small…and my father and brother died 2 years ago in a car accident…” said Sango, looking into the green swirling tea clouds within her cup.

But in Chapter 3 she says “Don’t worry…it’s alright to ask. They died in a car accident 7 years ago when I was nine. I never got to say good bye. They left early that morning for a meeting about getting the house sold and a man driving a stolen car hit them head on. The man lived but both my parents died instantly…” said Sango

Is she lying to Miroku for some reason and making up different stories? I don't understand
person mewy
schedule November 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
LOVED IT!!! MUST HAVE MORE
person techempath1 (not signed in)
schedule October 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I loved it! It was so cute!!!! Can't wait for more!
person techempath1 (not signed in)
schedule October 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Coulda sworn I read that chpater, but the end is so unfamiliar to me... Great job, can't wait for more!