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October 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hehee I love parental Inuyasha
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October 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
please update please pretty please
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October 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I can already tell this fic is going to be as amazingly believable as The Lucky Ones.
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October 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
great job as usual! ^_^ thank you for shairing another wonderful chapter of your story
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October 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*claps* Bravo! I've been waiting for someone to include Coyote in an Inuyasha fic, and of course it would be you! And kudos for continuing to include the natural parenting details. I can't imagine a cuter picture than a coyote hanyou in a sling! The budding romance (or lack thereof) between Yukio and Emma iomisomising; I'm intrigued to find out what happened to the Coyote father, as well as what the mother thinks of all of this. Looking forward to your next update!
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October 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love your stories, you are a very talented writer! Keep it up! I loved the first series, this one has the potential to be even better than the first! Can't wait to read more.
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October 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful!! I am a huge fan of "The Lucky Ones" and when I saw this story, a continuation of sorts, I became so pumped! Wonderful beginning ~ the Native Americans and their culture colliding with the Youkai/Hanyou one is very intriguing. Can't wait to see more!! And the comment about Sesshomaru trying to own everything ~ LOL!!! I can SO totally see Sesshoumaru being completely at home in the business world ~ must seem just like home, aquiring power, building an empire, crushing the weak and getting to tell almost everybwhatwhat to do. I like Yukio saying the he fully expects his Uncle to eventually own everything ~ ROFL! Scarily, I agree. Now I am wondering why the great Western Lord Sesshomaru doesn't have any children of him own ~ isn't continuing the bloodlines super-important now? So I would think that Sesshomaru, in that ruthless and and efficient manner of his, would guarentee that his father's great bloodline doesn't die out with him and Inuyasha. And I would think that Rin would want a child too, Sesshomaru couldn't have rubbed off on her That much! LOL! Brilliant story ~ a wonderful continuation of a wonderful epic.
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October 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. The character development is incredable. They jump right out of the page at you and act out the scene right in front of you eyes. You're a terrific writer. The emotions embodied through dialoge and body langauge is masterfully done. I love how Yukio is so torn up about a new mate. I can't wait until the next chapter comes out!
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October 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is a lovely story. It weaves in perfectly with The Lucky Ones, and continues the story so well. I love the Yukio back story, as well as the interaction between Kagome and Yukio. I'm also happy to see the Ian is doing so well. Glad to have the characters back for more!
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October 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is such a beauitful Story very well wriiten. I can't wait to read more