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plz update soon cant wait to read more!!!!! great writing love ur other story!!!

This is just to let you know if you don't already know that pieces of your story are missing. EX. on chapter one the story stops right after Inuyasha says the a pup needs his mother's milk the chapter stops. This is just to let you know incase don't. I am sorry if I am telling you nothing new.

The Coyote Child shows the same thought and depth to character that drew me into 'The Lucky Ones'. She makes the characters so 'real' you almost wonder about the people you pass on the stree.

And it looks like we'll see a bit of the pain Yukio carries with him. Make me want to give him a big hug and tell him, 'It's OK. There really is someone else out there for you'. But I'll let Terri do that, in her own style.

I anxiously await the next chapter. but I'm sure Ms. Botta knows that.

AMGxR

good chapter as always. in my latest chapter of my tory, I seem to be following your chapter writing style. keep up the good work, dark

I like the dream bit. Very nice.

I'm really enjoying your story. I loved "The Lucky Ones", and this one shows just as much promise. I'm looking forward to more :).

hey terri-great story so far, i just loved your others story"lucky ones" and i think this one is going to be just as wonderful, love how you are concertrating on yukio in this one(he is a great character and like you put in lucky ones amazing how he takes after a mixture of inu and kagome personality wise even though he is not their biological child) so question is this a reincarnation thing? meaning emma and yukio's 1st mate, as yukio is comparing the two it reminds me of how inu would compare kagome and kikyou's personalities. i see a comparision in yukio and inu's feelings on their past loves(at least when inu was younger before him and kagome got together-from lucky ones story) will inu put his two cents in? seems yukio could find some help from his dad being what inu went thru with kikyou and kagome, learning to move ahead and live is not easy as your character yukio is finding out. can't wait for more chapters, please hanging on waiting for more!

this is byfar onethe the best sequels i've ever read, fanfiction or book. it's truly amazing and a perfect continuation to a perfect story. you're original, creative, detailed and i hold your writing in the highest respect. inuyasha is my favorite show and it's wonderful to see that you haveturetured the spirit of it, blowing my mind away with your words. i'll be sitting on the edge of my seat, waiting anxiously until the realease of you next captivating chapter. by the way, your writing has inspired my creative mind and has helped me to create my own spectacular works of literature recently. i sincerely thank you for that. keep up that wonderously imaginative mind of yours!

Hey, I like the story and your writing style, but can you please write more about Yash/Kag. I know this is supposed to bre are about Yukio, but I just don't find him to be very interesting on his own. Maybe it's because I love Yash's "in your face" personality, but whatever the reason, I see Yukio mal male Kagome and that just doesn't impress me much. So, could you please just add a little more Yash fluff. I do love the actual plot though, so keep writing.

Hey, I like the story and your writing style, but can you please write more about Yash/Kag. I know this is supposed to be more about Yukio, but I just don't find him to be very interesting on his own. Maybe it's because I love Yash's "in your face" personality, but whatever the reason, I see Yukio as a male Kagome and that just doesn't impress me much. So, could you please just add a little more Yash fluff. I do love the actual plot though, so keep writing.