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for When Two Paths Entwine

by Babs

person TAJE
schedule October 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I know that Sess is insatiable as a strong drug, but WHOA! Kagome sure like to load her life with challenges! Whew! How addicted to each other can you get! Well our girl will have to deal the best she can. Hey! Where's my boy Inuyasha? Guess I'll have to wait next time! Boy Babs, you and your Co-Authors know how to deal! Waiting ever patiently for the next continuing drama of WHEN TWO PATHS ENTWINE!!!!!!!! Peace!
person Megan Consoer
schedule September 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
person sendosha
schedule September 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Poor Sesshoumaru, he doesn´t deserve that, Kags is a coward! Great Chapter, I´m looking forward to the next one
person Megan Consoer
schedule September 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
schedule September 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
at ch 11 Gawd! my stomach was in knots from all the tension. I feel like someone just ganged up on me and thugged me to death with superior penmanship. My throat is still clenched. >gulps< Well done and well worth waiting for. I think that I'll read the entire story again.
person techempath1
schedule September 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AWESOME part! Poor Kagome! I'm sure Kaede isn't as worried about it as Kagome thinks. I can't wait for more! I live for this story. I would love to find out how Sesshomaru finds out!


Come back soon!
person Brenda
schedule September 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is a great story,each chapter gets better and better.Keep up the good work and please e-mail me when a new chapter is finished.
Thanks,
B.
person Della
schedule August 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely love your story, but if you leave it there for long I will cause you serious discomfort. You could have stopped anywhere else in the chapter, but you chose to stop just when Inuyasha sees the baby... update soon please...
person sesshy-koi
schedule August 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Darn you to heck!! Nice cliffie!!;P
person karlina
schedule August 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey...this is an awesome story keep going..it had me holding my breath to find out what happens next!!! much support