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OMG the suspense is killing me.

thanks for updating, I early await the next chapter and the revealations!

I have a question. Why is it you people never actually get it to where Sesshoumaru sees his son? Why can't you actually finish the story, because it's not making them avid read, it's pissing them off?

I definitely want to know when you post the next chapter! What an amazing fic. You've got a great plot, excellent characterizations, and an easy to read style. Update soon!

Pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee update I love you story I want Sesshoumaru to find out that he has a son.

Very nice chapter, as expected. I have to admit, I'm curious as heck about Kagome's disappearance. As usual you've had me waiting in suspense to see who would reaveal what when. Did you get that? LOL Anyway, Nice chapter. I look forward to the next.

glad for this update. it was great but did hope there was more.

@12: thank you so much for updating. I re-read the previous chapter just to refresh my memory, so whew, it was like a round from a double-barrelled shotgun. you slay me. I feel as if I got grade A story-oin. enough to last the rest of the day. Ahhhh!

I can only imagine how difficult a story this intricate is to write. You've got an amazing handle on it, though. Each chapter builds suspense at a believable pace and interweaves different plot lines with practiced ease. I get so excited about each new installment that I don't care how long it takes to update, because I know for a fact that I'll always read each new chapter at my first chance. I'm really anxious to find out what happened to Kagome, and who was waiting in the shadows as they watched Sesshoumaru and Inuyasha about to make the biggest mistake of this whole investigation. Really, this fic is amazing! It's got romance, espionage, betrayal, political/corporate intrigue and sick children!! GAK! I adore it! Take your time, hon. A story like this one breeds fans that stick around for a *long* time.

Oh this chapter was just one big cliff-hanger! ARGH! Now I'm dying to know where Kagome is? Who is setting up poor old Kaede? Where Sesshomaru is going, and what in the world is wrong with Ryu? Great chapter, by the way. It just left me with more questions, which means that I'll be waiting with baited breath for the next update. I understand your need to work on one story at a time. It does get really hard to juggle. Although I hated to hear that I have to wait so long for the next update of My Enemy. I have fallen in love with that story as well as this one. Good luck with them all! Til next time~

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