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for When Two Paths Entwine

by Babs

person Gem
schedule February 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This chapter clarified things nicely. You can start to see which side the characters are on, and the fact that every one BUT Kagome and maybe Houjo are playing someone else to one extent or the other. (Hmmm.... Houjo as the evil mastermind behind it all?) Na just to strange. Should prove to be fun when it all hits the fan so to speak, even more so with characters like Yura to work with. Uh ya... by the way, thanks for not stepping on the eyeballs.^_^ All better now, and not nearly as sleep deprived, so I try not to weird anyone out. (grins) Waiting eagarly for the next update, thank you.
person Babygirl20008
schedule February 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great work as always. I can't wait to read the next chap. Keep it up
person Kai
schedule February 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sorry I didn't leave a review last time! I haven't been on for a while and when I have I've been to busy. Anyway I love the two new chapters they were great! Also the plot is really picking up now and I'm happy to see the Yura thing is a scan. I've never really liked her, she gets on my nerves alot in anime and fanfics. Anyway great jobs and keep up the wonderful work I love it! Kai
person techempath1
schedule February 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Uh well Rin was a surprise!... And I thought all this time Sango Miroku Cyn Shippou were working AGAINST Inu and Sess... wow.. So is Yura working for Naraku? hahaha...can't wait to see. More soon!
person mrs sesshy
schedule February 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
good girl! you find time to update. i'm also busy at work and i relax reading inu fanfictions, k/s only though...i can't wait for the big meeting and when will sess dump yura????
person Hazeru
schedule February 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Poor Kagome must think Sess is totally different than whom she thought he was. Update soon because I always look forward to reading your stories!
person Gem
schedule February 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Just finished reading ALL of this and the first story (what can I say, i'm and addictive personality, with slight masichistic tendancies!) And it was well worth having to scrape my eyeballs off the floor. I may have to buy stock in an eye drop company at this rate. So if you have not guessed by now I LIKE. Can't wait for the next update.
person DarkMystic
schedule February 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hello, I would just like to say, that I am happy that you told me of the update. I really enjoyed reading the story, and I think you're a great writer. Also, im really excited now to see what happends to Kagome, and Sesshoumaru. One thing that im wondering about is who is the girl that Inuyasha is having trouble asking out, It doesnt seem to be kagome, wouldnt he give her any hint? Anyways, good work on the story so far, update soon, and keep me informed.
person Hazeru
schedule January 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I can't wait to see how Sess will react when Inuyasha reveals his attraction to his Kay! I hope you update soon and sign me up for your story update email notice.
person Jazzy
schedule January 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this story and the other what would happen to them will kay tell sessy