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for When Two Paths Entwine

by Babs

person DarkMystic
schedule March 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for notifying me about the update in the chapter, I was happy to read it finally, and by the way I finally got a chance to read when two paths collide, it really brought me to more understanding about the story, thanks. Anyways, was a great story, and I love reading everything you write, its wonderful. Update asap. ^_^
person mrs sesshy
schedule March 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
finally an update...it's getting more interesting with older rin & angel deceit??? hope to see sess/kag interaction next...
person techempath1
schedule March 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I don't know whether to trust Angel or not... I can't wait for more. Dn't worry about the review responses. I love parts better than those! *Take care!!

Ooh...and more soon.
person Gem
schedule March 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Getting really good! Looks like there is more than one spy envolved, and things are convoluted. Don't keep us waiting too long!
person TAJE
schedule March 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh Damn! Wow! Too many secrets here. Sesshy's full of suprises and Kagome has one of her own. Damn, this is getting sticky. I too am curious to see Sesshy's reaction to Kagome's and Hojo's date. Girl! You Rule this Story, and Sesshy! Write On Mama!
person binab86
schedule February 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
man i love this story i hope that you update soon please i cant wait
person DarkMystic
schedule February 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Man, Kagome is going to have her hands full, I mean hojo is hawt for her body. Sheesh, and Sesshoumaru is going to be a bit worried if he sees her at the ball with anouther guy(that is if he goes.) Anyways, I think this story is very exciting, and I want to see more soon. SO! Update ASAP. *Crosses her fingers.* I hope he finds out about his son soon.
person Hazeru
schedule February 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I can't wait for Sesshoumaru's reaction to Kagome going out with Hojo. Update soon! ^.^

PS ~ In concerns to your offer..... I don't think I could go for a debate team since last time I was involved in one, I was forcefully removed..... - -;;
person Arryelle
schedule February 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
very very cool can't wait for the next chappie plz don't wait as long as you did last time to update and there's still no lemon or lime or citrus but promise you WON'T put an orange in this thats usually when naruku or anybody else has sex with kagome besides her love interest. Ok thats it for now update soon J'ai bonne foi en tu avoir!

loves Arry
person techempath1 (not signed in)
schedule February 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I figured more out!!!! Yay!!! Come back with more, i wanna know how this works out! :D