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for Stronger

by Fairia13

person New Fan
schedule October 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Can we say kill Alina and her general. I think that Sesshoumaru will do just that once he hear of the
plot against Rin and himself. Poor Rin, she does not deserve that. I just hope that she will listen to Sess
and forgive him. Update soon.
person animegirl007
schedule October 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
The lemon was PERFECT!!!!!!!!!!!! Not every detail must be told, I was very happy with the story.....I can't wait how Sesshomaru killing that bitch and her general......it's going to be sssssooooo good!!!!!!!!! update, UPDATE< UPDATE!!!!!!!
person Cassie
schedule October 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow, I really love thiory ory and do us all a favor and KILL OFF THAT BITCH ALINA, I can't wait for chapter 7 and hopefully the title of that chapter will be (Capture and Conquer ) or (The Willing Prey) or (Finally United) please don't keep us in suspense any longer.
person YoukaiFate
schedule October 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
:GLARING: If looks could kill...don't you think I have enough death threats of my own without having your rabid rrs ars added to the list? And you ask when the lemon should be posted. Hmm...how 'bout YESTERDAY?

LOL - My power cut off earlier, and when i came back online, my computer froze. THRICE. What a day. SNARL. But I wrapped it up by reading your wonderful fic, love it love it love it...and can at least say here what I daren't say elsewhere...

UPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATE

Fate
person dawn
schedule October 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was awesome!!! Oh, and I want to correct a mistake in my earlier review, chp. 4 wasn't the best chp., it HAD been chp. 3, but now it's chp. 6. Whew, glad that was all straightened out! Anyway, I can't wait for the next chp!
person vashta
schedule October 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ok, I like this fic, it is pretty original.
most of them are the same old story rewritten.
Please don't let her get scared, or that woman
mess them up to bad!
person Anon
schedule October 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
More!! More!! I need more of this story!!! It kicks ass
person Meres
schedule October 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Evil, evil, evil cliffy! You ought to be ashamed! Update soon!
person Polarkitty
schedule October 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I want the next chapter by tonigh........please? I'm dying in suspense here, what happens??????
person RFW
schedule October 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow. This last chapter(6) was really good. I think once Sesshomaru calms down he's going to find Alina and kick her ass. OR everyone in the household will find out what happened with Alina's plots and kill her. Either way it ends badly for Her Bitchship. Although, what will kill Alina the MOST has to be the fact that her lies only sent Sesshomaru right into Rin's arms which is the LAST thing she wanted. That's what I call KARMA.

Oh and UPDATE SOON