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OMG. That chapter was really good. I hope that Sess finds her soon and can tell her that it wasn't HIM and that she can tell him that she's pregnant! Damn that Alina. She's lucky he didn't slice her in two with his claws. He should have! Please, let them get back together soon!!!

Okay that sort of pissed me off when I wrote a review and it didn't go through. As I was saying I love your story. It's the exact type of story I look for when hoping to read a good story about Rin and Sesshoumaru. Please keep up the writing, I'm looking forward to the next chapter.

Katta

This story is absolutely GREAT so far! I've only read Chapter 1 but I wanted to sand and rate and review before I continued. I love your style and this storyline is quite intriguing. I never found myself interested in Sess/Rin before, but I really like this and look forward to reading the rest. (I found the link in the Inu Yasha Love Group on AOL, since you said you wanted to know that.)

Beetch, j00 goin D00000WN!
Really, if I ever had to meet her, I'd slap her (screw the fact that I'm human!)

More, please, or so god help me, I will hunt you down and surgically attach you to a computer and keyboard.

Oh....this......this is just cruel and unusual punishment.....it was ing ing so good...i need CHAPTER 8 up now...please....DON'T DO THIS TO MEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!

MORE!MORE! I need MORE! That is an awesome piece of work. I loved it and highly recommend it to everyone. pLZ update soon!

Oh man this is good stuff I really loved the lemon and the rest of the story, could you do a favor for me. Can you please have Rin with Sesshomaru when they find out with that bitch and her general were doing to Rin. And to let Rin slap the bitch after that and makeshomshomaru kill both the bitch and the her general. This is the only favor I ask of you. Please update really soon ok. Can't wait to read next chapter. Please don't keep us waiting.

kick there asses please update soon

ATOKI IS SO FUCKING COOL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! omg he's awsome! and yay the bitch is going down and he will fix everythign! :jumps around happily:

Wow, wow, wow. What a chapter this was(7). So many good parts. How typical of Rin to apologize to Sesshomaru for biting him, though. I burst out laughing at that part because it's just so silly yet so Rin-ish. And the next morning with poor Jaken was just so hilarious. If Sesshomaru wasn't so controlled he would have probably willingly chased that toad down. Then again, it is more fun to let Rin handle the situation.

Speaking of situations, damn it, I want to see what Sess is going to do to Miss I Can't Let Go. I have a funny feeling some people in the room are going to lose their heads and no one will really miss them all that much. I just hope that Sess gets to Rin in time before she does something drastic.

And Rin should have known better. I thought Alina's general forced Sess's speaking manner too much. He was overly cold and overly forceful, you think she'd tell the difference but then again being as surprised as she was probably took her by surprise.

I just don't think Alina gets it. She's not "only human" that's obvious how Rin knew what Sess was feeling when she wasn't in the same room as him and the like. She must have someg thg that is more than just being a plain old human, no matter what Jaken says. Who knows what all changed in her when Sesshomaru brought her back with Tensegia. I don't think that's ever been truly investigated. She didn't become a demon but I don't think she's remained an ordinary human either.

And in final response: MORE story SOON