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by Fairia13

person sphinx
schedule November 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
here's e best story of sess/rin romance. extremely enjoyed it, aniway update soon, lookin forward to see wad's upcoming for them.





person animelo
schedule November 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great fic! Please don't leave it there. Please continue you are great!
person Fate
schedule November 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hot damn, Fairia! That lemon makes up for missing Raidon for a few hours...now that I have him back... (feral grin)...didn't you say bonded demons take on each other's characteristics? (Bigger feral grin) Now to see how much my lovely lion can make me purr...and to see if I can make him whinney...LOL.

Quirky? Bouncy? ROFL - now I KNOW you saw me stringing Christmas lights up at the store...got a quirk in my side and was bouncing all over the top step of the ladder trying to get that damn string of lights looped over the right hooks. The air was blushing by the time I was done cursing, and I was windmilling my arms trying to regain my balance---one foot on the top step of the ladder where it says "Caution: Do not Stand on This Step", the other's toes planted against the glass window trying to keep a balance. My old gymnastics coach would have been horrified by my preformance, and I know I prolly horrified other people---I was in a skirt. Granted, a long skirt, but still...

And that distrust seems rampant....my manly motto is, "Prove you're worth MY effort." Smirk. As for kids...they seem to like me...can't get rid of 'em, the runts...screaming, drooling, fidgeting little demons...gotta love 'em...I guess...

Many thankies for Shukumei. I say again, I might have supplied an initial drawing for her, but you took her and flew with it. And as for work, puh-leaz! Reading your chapters is a priviledge...which means that I want MORE...much MORE...I'll give you a few hours. Me and Raidon...er...grammar...Raidon and I...will be a little busy for a while...

Here, kitty, kitty...

person animegirl007
schedule November 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter but, I need to understand....Are you saying that Sesshomaru is suffering because of their bond and Rin doesn't feel anything at all about him....Her angry I can understand, but shouldn't she always be feeling miserable too, I mean she was in love with him......And now, you brought Kohaku in.......You better not have him fall in love with her...because all hell will break loose once Sesshomaru find her and she with another man.....please update soon....I love it...........
person New Fan
schedule November 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I like the new character. I think that Raidon needed someone special in his life. As for Sess. He is a very smart
guy. Why did he not think of Inuyasha to find Rin?? I hope he does not lose his mind before he finds her. I also
hope that Rin does not falls for Kahaku and vise a versa. Knowing full well Rin still loves Sess. Update soon.
person Dark Phoenix
schedule November 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Woops. I stand corrected. looks like aff. net is working just fine. Eh... but the end of this chapter seems to be cut off...?
person Cryj© $
schedule November 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ok...when i said i wanted chapter 8 up, i didn't mean like this. Seshy is on trial and missing his poor mate, and she is still confused, very hurt, and it isn't even the truth. PLUS SHE'S PREGNANT. I hope in the end there's a happily ever after deal going on here because i'm gonna be mad if there isn't.......

YOU'RE VERY GOOD GIRL...DON'T EVER LOOSE YOUR TALENT ^-^
schedule November 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
GREAT chapter!!! So much great information!! I love long chapters, although I still hate to see them end. ESPECIALLY when they end with a cliffie!! This is going just wonderful, and I really can't wait to see what happens when Sesshomaru finds her. Update soon!
person Shadiyaray
schedule November 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yeah!! Yasha's mind!
Love your humor ath the beginning!
It was so cute!!
Great chapter!! I mean Awesome!!
Your writing style has developed a lot!! I'm impressed.
As always I love the emotion that you place within your characters.
I'm glad that you included Inuyasha and the whole gang!
Sesshomaru and Rin have a soul bond.
How Kewl is that? That just means that the lemons will be even that more intense. : )
Great Chappie!!
Can't wait for more!!
person Bethany
schedule November 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
NO!!! Don't leave it there!!!!!!! Update SOON!