AFF Fiction Portal

rate_review Reviews

for Stronger

by Fairia13

person animegirl007
schedule December 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WHEN WILL YOU HAVE SESSHOMARU FIND HER??????? I'M DIEING OVER HERE!!!!!!!!!!! SHE NEEDS TO KNOW THE TRUTH.....UPDATE SOON PLEASE!!!!!!!!!
person Wow123
schedule December 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
MORE!!!!!MORE!!!!
person HauntedReality
schedule December 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I figured she was pregnant, but I wasn't sure if you were going to end with that in the cliffhanger or not. I loved Inuyasha's comment about being fearsome. How cute was that? I hope Sesshoumaru finds her soon though. I'm sad that they are apart.
schedule December 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ah the complications continue! Now Jiro wants a piece of the Rin action. This is going to be a great conference, and as a long time Kouga lover I really look forward to how you deal with his character. I love all your original characters. You've given them a lot of depth, and while I still love Atoki above all others, I really like to dislike Lady Alina. But again, they are all wonderful. I feel bad that I haven't kept up with this fic as I should have. I loved it from the very beginning, but then I developed an overwhelming obsession with Rurouni Kenshin and all things Inuyasha were kind of put on hold. Not to mention I started writing in addition to reading...which you know since you reviewed one of my stories!!! Anyway, expect more reviews shortly because this story deserves to have every chapter reviewed, not just the last one I finish on!
schedule December 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Just finished Chapter 5. *GASP!* Ok, I'd review more, but I must find out what kind of trick this is! If they really kissed then Sesshoumaru is going to have to have his lips disinfected!
schedule December 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Eek! He made her feel the bulge in his pants? Oh Sess....what crazy things love and lust do to you! And I feel so bad for both of them. I want to have Sess turn into true demon form and bite off her head. OK, maybe nothing that extreme. Maybe take away her title and power and wealth and make her live as a commoner. I also feel bad for Kenji in this. Though at present I'm glad Lady Alina doesn't return his affections because I'm quite sure he deserves better.
schedule December 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love that even after all the signs that something was amiss that Rin still mated with him. I'm glad that a few weeks of illusion couldn't destroy her faith in him. But it is also totally understandable that it shook it. After all, she is a strong woman. It wouldn't be right for her to follow blindly. Also, I'm glad Atoki was back in the mix this time. I should start an Atoki fanclub! I love the way he took on the fake Sesshoumaru, thinking it was the real one at first. I feel so bad for him not being able to be with the one he loves.
person HauntedReality
schedule December 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I am really looking forward to seeing what you do with Kohaku's character. He is ripe with possibilities!
person Pez
schedule November 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
you know, of you keep making this as long as it is going its gonna be really borring, now lemme guess
she will be involved whith kohaku, have her baby, raise it whith kohaku, when sess finds her they get all over him then they listen
youre making this like forever, and it makes it borring try judt to get on whith it as soon as you can and beter like that
t
schedule November 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I was glad to return after the holiday and find an update! I decided to treat myself and reread the whole piece instead of just reading the new chapter. Looking forward to more!!!