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That was a great story. I wonder will you be writing a sequel to this story or is it the End?

You MUST make asequel to this story it is one of my favorites and i think you could definately make another from the end of this story on. i woudl love to know how things worked out and stuff. please add an authors note saying if you will or wont soon. i would apreciate it so much .

I wish you could hear this ...but, I guess this will do....CLAP!!!!!CLAP!!!!!!CLAP!!!!!!CLAP!!!!CLAP!!!!!CLAP!!!! BRAVO!!!BRAVO!!!BRAVO!!!!....This was so good....this story is on my recommed reading list....I hope you write more Rin and Sesshomaru stories in the future....I will be there writings reviews if you do......GOOD JOB!!!!!!!!IT WAS VERY WILL DONE..........

this is great

Another chapter! OK, so I don't know if you do this or not, but feel free to e-mail me when you post chapters (I realize this is ending, but I'm sure I'll like the sequel.) I read the reviews you got, and I hope you weren't to discouraged by the negative one. I know that would ruin my day so I just want you to know that I enjoyed the chapter. Sure, I'd like to see Sess and Rin back together, but I think you need to write the story the way it feels right to you. You asked if anyone had any ideas for the ending. I don't have any perse, but if you want to e-mail me, I'll give you my IM screenname and I'd be happy to act as a sounding board for your thoughts.

Did I say HOLY DAMN the first time I read this chapter? How about WOOHOO! Girl, you have a way with emotion that makes me just sit up in my chair and smile a silly smile...and you better get crackin' on that final chapter. I'm about to go to bed and will dream of it...and some hot hentai lions...*ahem*...anyway, YOU are a WONDROUS writer, Fair-chan! I LUV it more and more and I want Amaya out. NOW. Stamps foot and throws potatos back...and Quayles...and empty brandy glasses. G'Nite and thanx for the sweet dreams!

Fate

That was just horrible. Having Sess miss the birth of his child. I know why you didn't update, you suck and ruined your own story that's why!

This is such a great chapter!! I love the end of it. Every time I read it, it gives me goosebumps. Very well written!
Now let's get this last chapter pounded out so we can see the sequal! ;-)

this is great please update

I enjoyed the chapter. I am glad that you updated. Will Kahaku go to Sess to tell him where Rin and his child is. I hope that the child
will take in his father and not be afraid? Update soon.