rate_review Reviews

You know, I've read a few Sesshomaru and Rin stories, and although there are some who do not like this pairing, I must say to you, YOU ROCK! YOU ROCK! one more time, YOU ROCK! I love how an author can get emotions out of me when I read. You did just that. I was angry, sad for the two of them, and happy with it's outcome. I've read the whole story, I look forward to more of your stories. Please keep writing!

You know, this Lady Alina needs her ass kicked. But I love the way you make Rin bounce her. And I love the Head Cook Hakashi! Oh and the General Atoki. Love this story! Chapter 2 is very intense you know, the Armory, Un Beso indeed! Reading on! Peace!

Oh! I Love It! Absolutely no flame required. If there are any, it's only because they cannot see the artistic value in your storytelling. Beautiful! Wonderful, I'm reading on. Peace!

DAMN THIS WAS LONG I SO LOVED YOU ROCK WOOHOO

This is no less then wounderful. You have a great deal of talent. I couldn't stop reading , you should consider publising some of your work for the market. I hope that you'll continue the story in some way.
Oh yes a brief note for the person that gave you a hard time not to long ago about name and such, they need to get a life ! and stop being jealous of the talents of others i guess it's easier to condemn people then it is to try to be something yourself. And i am glad that you didn't let them go you handled it with grace and poise , you did good.
Again thank you for such a wounderful story. and i turly hope you continue to write.
Best of Luck Colette Brown

That was so freakin AWEsome! I loved your storyline, and Kimi is so cute! I do hope she is in the sequel. *pathetic, hopeful look* Anyway, great fic. One of the best I've read. Keep up the great work. Your author dialogues were hilarious, by the way. Again, awesome. I look forward to the sequel.

I enjoyed this! I have to say this isn't a plot that I have seen before:)

I don't often review, but this, despite most characters being out of character, was worth it. Kimi is a wonderful addition; I get the feeling future stories may center on her. As a critique, there was quite a bit of confusion for "they're" versus "there," and "whether" and "weather." I'm a stickler for spelling, but your fic was well written enough that it didn't bother me as much as it normally would. Very well done. You did capture Inuyasha fairly well, and you have a strong plot. Just to be helpful, one writer to another, if you need a beta, or even a second beta, for spelling and grammar, I don't mind. Other than those two technical items, you write very well. Looking forward to more.

awww!!! and ohhhh!!! a sequel????? freakin sweet! is that kid of their's gonna be a trouble maker?

constuctive critisisism: a lemon after they got back together would have been nice...

Whew. That was a trip. ^_~

I just recently finished watching Inuyasha, and the last few episodes and the third movie somehow instilled a fetish for Sesshoumaru/Older!Rin in me...but unfortunately, good stories with this pairing seem to be extremely hard to find. *LOL* You have no idea how happy I was to finally stumble across your story, after hours of searching. And damn, was this story good. A total emotional roller coaster, with flawless characterization, fascinating OCs (I don't easily go for OCs!), a heart-wrenching plot, and of course, great lemons. ;P Thank you very much for hours of pleasure.

I agree with some of the reviewers that there were aspects of the story that were problematic (like the reviewer who mentioned the improbability of Rin's escape)---particularly, the number of typos/spelling errors was distracting. Some examples that pop to mind are your constant use of "peruse" when you clearly mean "pursue", and your frequent confusion of "then" with "than". Nonetheless, the story was totally fantastic, far above my expectations (after having read several not so stellar Sess/Rin stories before this one...-_-). I enjoyed it thoroughly; couldn't tear myself away. ;P Now the only problem is that I have to wait for the sequel...*groan* (That's a not so subtle encouragement to get working on it ASAP, BTW. *LOL*)

Anyway, in short: this was fabulous! Thank you for your efforts in piecing together this wonderful story! ^_^