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the second chapter was really good, didnt even mind the wait after reading it. I like how you entwine these other characters into the story adds layers and character developement. But now i cant wait for you next chapter, hope you post a new one soon.

I hope that there is more to this story. Great first chapter. Update sooooon.

i liked it. it's very deep and very "adult". Sometimes when you read Sess/ Rin fictions they are light and goodhearted, you know what I mean? I have only encountered deep fanfic's like this one, once or twice before. There is alot of feelings there, alot happening. I can almost see what's going to happen, but I hope you don't make Sess and Rin's first time a "rape-oh-im-fine-whoopy" thing. (if this is a rin/sess fic that is.)

Good luck and update. I'll be looking forward to reading the next chapter.

I'm a sess/rin fan. So of course I can't get enough of them. and this is a great start. Can you please most more chapters. the detail is great, the dialogue so far...is good--not much dialogue. Can I see some rin, kick some of these demon women's asses that actually agreed to have sex with L.S. (Lord Sesshomaru)?!

Sincerely,
VB

I am a big Sesshoumaru and Rin fan, so I try to read all stories written about them. I like your story so far it has made my have to see updated list ;)
I think if Sesshoumaru is not careful his sexy general may just take Rin, and you know the way you have written him I may just beable to get into that relationship. But at last I know that my man Sesshoumaru will come to his senses before that happpens. I hope.

KNB

keep going please update soon

your story is off to a great start. i love how you added in the general. i don't think this story should be deleted. you should continue with it. i hope u will update soon!

YAAAAAAAAAAAAAY! I am SO glad you posted this wonderfully awesome fic, Fairia! And kept the first chapter intact, it was too good to splinter off and a nice dish to devour in itself and leave you wanting more...MUCH more! The fact that you have six reviews out of only 67 visits does major justice to your talent...not many people take the time out to review, and one in ten is extremely cool. Not that you don't deserve much more! n_n I loved reading this the first time, and loved it even more reading it now. Though I still have a hankering for A to to get Rin...though THAT sentiment changes over time. *wink* AND YOU BETTER NOT DELETE THIS STORY!!! I won't be the only one glaring daggers at you, lady! Your writing style is amazing, your creative talent for believable OC's stunning, your description and attention to detail sensational, and (now that your eyes are tired reg thg this incredibly long review) I'm panting for more!

Helluva story, Lady Fairia!

Fate

*jaw drops* Well-written .. g.. good storyline... tons of potential angst... ayep, you need to continue this. Or I will do something bad.... *wanders off to contemplate possible consequences and wait*

i liked the little twist at the end, this story is very good and i hope you continue it; since i love to read good sess/rin pairings.