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for Stronger

by Fairia13

person asiancherries
schedule October 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i just stumbled upon this story yesterday out of luck, and i'm glad i did. your writing style is mature and your content is strong. you are building a fine story that has great potetntial, and on top of everything is really enjoyable. i would like to ask if maybe you could pen a little backstory on how/why Lord Raidon has Jiro, because that would really reinforce Sesshomaru's reasonings for keeping Rin without even having to explain them. (i.e., if it's okay for Raidon, then it is okay for Sesshomaru). plus, i'm curious. if you get a chance, check me out on mediaminer, under asiancherries. if you read anything, read my story "His" because that is the one i'm the most proud of. it's Sesshomaru/Rin based one-shot, no lemon and a bit of fluff, but mostly angst. keep writing, and i will keep checking for updates!
person soma910
schedule October 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I'm greatly impressedy by your writing style and the way you developed the characters. I'm a Sess/Rin fan, and I really like your story because you don't try to rush into the love scenes. Instead, the plot flows together very nicely and logically. As much as I love the romance, I also like seeing the characters interact as they would in the original anime/manga. Keep up the good work! ^_^
person vashta
schedule October 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really like the way you are portraying Sesh. in this. I just hope things don't get to awfully bad with the other lady. Ready for the next chap now!
person YoukaiFate
schedule October 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I'll make your day like you made mine. Raidon is hella hot and that weekend of borrowing him might turn into a hot month in the tropics...*hentai grin*. Each time I meet him again I'm deeper in the pit of raion love. Poor Sessy is being cast aside for a golden tawny with a suave chuckle and refreshing outlook on the other characters. And you made me laugh, changing the maid's name in the laundry to Shukumei. You continue to surprise me, Lady Fairia! And as for going after people with bricks, I'll be nice and ask permission for that month-long sojourn with Raidon. Though it might last two...

*Hentai grin dissolving into mad obsessive gleam in fan-atic's eye*
person essie
schedule October 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wow please update soon
person A Flower-sama
schedule October 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yayyy!! Another great chapter, I was certainly looking forward to it! I'm very glad you updated, and I shall wait for the next chapter with great apprehension!
person animegirl007
schedule October 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
It going to be very interesting at this meeting....Jiro crushing on Rin, Lady Alina curshing on Sesshomaru, Lord Raidon laughing at everyone situation, and poor Rin and Sesshomaru stuck in the middle. and I can't wait to read what happen when Rin finds out about Sessy and the maid.......keep updating please....I need my weekly dose of your story.......
person essie
schedule October 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ohhhhhhhhhhhh someone mad please update
person AzureDragoness
schedule October 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I would have to say... more often, but smaller. Either way, though, I ADORE this story, and may the snob be inflicted with a thousand annoying stalkers!! *doesn't like the "Lady"* Now then, that was my $0.02 worth, so more, please! ASAP would be good, too. I'll be waiting! *flits off*
person Shadiyaray
schedule October 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yeah!! Another Sess and Rin!!!
A very good Sess and Rin.
I really really like!!
One qion,ion, will there be a Kagome and Inuyasha LEMON Soon!!

Shadiyaray