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This story is well written. I'm enjoying watching Sess squirm as he fights his feelings for Rin, and I love what you've done with Rin now that she's an adult. Everyone seems to think that Sesshomaru has no emotions and is devoid of such things but it's all a face to the world if you ask me. He wants everyone to think he's Mr. Cool, Calm and Collected but underneath it all heot aot all that unfeelinf hef he was he'd not have taken in Rin at all and he'd have absolutely no patience for Jaken.

If I were Rin I'd confront Miss High and Mighty Lady Alina. She deserves to be taken down a peg or two. Sess wouldn't make her Lady of the Western Lands and then cheat on him. She should know that Sess wouldn't do that to her. . .although there is his fling with the maid BUT still, she does know that Sess can't really stand Alina anyways. I have a funny fng wng what ever happened, Sesshomaru has nothing to do with it and is going to have something to say about the whole mess. Someone should tell her Ladyship to start running right about now, no?

That was EEVILLLLL!!! !!! I'm guessing the next chapter wont be much better (im sure another evil cliffhanger)....Rin's confidence must be almost shattered by that display. You have to update before saturday!!! Please???

you better have an excuse for making sesshomaru break rin's heart and, oh, update soon
also did you know that you've just made the story more complc and and somewhat boring to read?????
untangle this mess soon or, i'm telling you, very few people will like to read your story then!!!!!"


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i forgot, i love the story and this is not a flame at all"!!!
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nooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo please update soon

nooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo please update soon

You better update so that I know how Alina made Sess kiss her. If you update very soon you will have me
look like this ^_^. Update soon.

Sick, Fair. Truly sick. Twisted. Evil. Reprehensible. You better post chapter six or I WON'T be responsible for the foaming-at-the-mouth, evil-eyed reaction of rabid readers.

PS - good job as always

Don't you dare leave me hanging like that!!!!!!! I bet it was her and her general dressed up like Sesshomaru.......I need answers soon......UPDATE...UPDATE....UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

No flames i promise. i just wanting to tell you that i have been reading the rest of your story for the last two days and i love it as always. So post more soon, sooner than soon!!!!!