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for When Two Paths Collide

by Babs

person corri
schedule May 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
luv the story
person goethicchick
schedule November 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
damn it you just had to stop there didnt you
this is a really grreat story please continue
schedule August 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great One Shot, and might I add I am very pleased that there is a sequel. I just reviewed the sequel, and I figured that since this is the story that got me hooked I aught to review this one as well. Love the entire story. Thanks for writing it!
schedule August 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ok. I've read a few stories so far at this site, and this is by far the best I've ever seen. What are you wasting your talent here in the virtual world? Put this on paper and sell it! you have a lot of passion and very good descriptive passages that don't bore me with the same words over and over. You paint a marvelous picture of desire. I wish we all had a cabin in the woods to go to every once in a lifetime. Well done
person Cac
schedule August 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOW! Wowwowwowwow! This was a good oneshot, but I love hot-passion-wekkendstand-and-then-oh-my-god-you're-my-bossetc. stories! This seems so good~!! (giddy giggle) Oh yay, I can't wait for more, enough chapters as good as the first and this is definately getting on my rec reading
person kuramasbluegurl
schedule August 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE IT!!!
well written, please continue!
person velika
schedule August 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
loved it!!! absolutely beautiful!!! continue sooooooooon, pleaseeeee!!!! i think kagome's baby is so adorable!!! what will sesshomaru do when he find out?? ack, please continue!!!
person Princess
schedule April 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! This story is SOOOOOOOOO Freaking awesome!!! Please write more pleeeeeeeeeeease!!!
person kitty
schedule January 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i love this storie please update soon
person snowfall
schedule November 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMG! That was soooooo breathtaking. Great start with the tension and animosity. I would have drug out the resistance to each other a bit more, but hey, that's me. Loved the lemon, the fact that she has a little Sess, and was wondering when she would end up working for him. Don't let him know about little Sess too soon. She should be nervous about telling him. More angsty tension! WooHoo!