rate_review Reviews

Good break from the henti. Hopefully a good plot line!

Great story keep it up! Yeah!

::sigh:: damn your good! liked this a lot adn i have a feeling I know why kag is out o sorts but i won't say. i hate being wrong in public. loved the lemon, it was wonderful adn the fustration aspect was great too. a lot of people underestimate the preview to the act. silly them! but you.....you've got this thing down pat. whoo! great fic. excited to read the next installment

updatwe or squeal

'WARNING: Possible explosions may occur. Scientists that have created Experiment 2669/robabelabeled 'Spud' are not responsible for belongings that are mysteriously set on fire, stolen, or been ripped to shreds. Thank you for your time.'
'SECOND WARNING: This may be a really long review... I might even have to split it up into different parts. *shrugs* Enjoy.'
*just stares at you while eyes flash red and twich uncontrollably* I... have been waiting... for SO MANY DAMNED CHAPTERS... *voice lowers to hushed whisper* and you cut it off there??? *hears sister coming up from behind, holding a knife, and I whirl around* "You wanna know something!!?? *sister freezes and jaw drops open* I didn't kill your fucking cat ON PURPOSE!!! I have sick and twisted needs so just LIVE WITH IT!!!!! *knife drops from sisters hand in shock* It was MY cat TOO!! It was a better friend than YOU ever were!! And you wanna know something else!!?? If you want to blame someone for killing the cat, blame HER! *points at you* (you know I love to do this by now, eh? heehee) THERE!! *calms down* I'm done." *by now sister is huddled in a far corner, shuddering with fear* *glares at you and growls the best a robot can, wich sounds like a penny being banged around in a tin bucket*

ACTUAL REVIEW: HOT chappie! Still want more. You want to know WHY I'm so desperate? 1) It's October, right? Right. Now, imagine your Canadian, like Yours Truly. *points at self* (but with the reviews I've been leaving, you'd think I was a German soldier from Wold War Two. ^_^[Yeah, I know. Sue me.]) You're heating's busted. It's not freezing cold, but you still want more warmth. Your lemons make me MELT! 2) I'm very sick-minded. In advance, if I end up posting this review by accident, like the other time, then God help me. My five minutes of Insanity are over. Bye-Bye!!

Oh, Fuck.

*shudders happily* Now THAT was a lemon... *shudders again* Only ooooone iddy bitty problem... I'M ON FIRE!! AAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHH!!! SOMEBODY HELP!!! *runs around and flaming body slams into wall* That's what I get. I push you too hard to gimme lemons and you kill me. Well, I've fulfilled my promise. I'm now a pile of ashes.

The whole thing was great!! Is there more?? *crawls toward you on flaming hands and knees* TELL ME WOMAN!! I AM NOW OFFICIALLY ADDICTED TO THIS!!! *whispers and rubs hands together* There's no turning back now... heeheehee...

I never shut up, do I? *shakes head and walkes away*

I have nothing to say to you. *crosses arms, turns head to the side and sticks nose up in the air*

P.S.-Chappie was fine when it came to spelling, etc.

P.S.2.-Why are you doing this to me?! Do you hate me THAT much?!

Yo. I had to go back and read Unleashed Desire to quench my lemony thirst. *starts chirping insanely like a bird for no apparent reason* PLEASE make a double update! I still need lemons! *realizes what I just said* Oh God... look what I've become... *shuffles toward you* DOUBLE UPDATE!!!!! *shuffles foreward agaileaslease? *whimper*

P.S.- Do you like cheese???? *smirks like insane idiot*