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September 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ooooohh! That was awesome. I think i love this story already even though its gonna be short! well Peace out!
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September 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
RAD!!! That was so dang awesome, I *loved* it! I can't wait to see the other one-shots you come up with! Wow...that was simply amazing! till next time cheers!
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September 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ah, great! I loved it! I can't wait to see the other pieces that you promised, and wholeheartedly thank LadyCatBailey for pointing me this way! It was a great story and very enjoyable to read. You write very well, and you have a good style. The only thing I saw was that you could use a bit of editing in the fact that you use the wrong version of certain words sometimes. Like 'week' vs. 'weak' and so on. But very minor over all. ^_^
I'll be waiting for more!
I'll be waiting for more!
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September 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
loved it! looking foward to the next chapter!!! and hojo was freain' scary! nicely done!!