AFF Fiction Portal

rate_review Reviews

for Sleeping with the Mob

by nena

schedule March 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this was a great story
person chanda
schedule January 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow, what a great story, I loved the three one shots. HOT!!!

chanda
person Anon
schedule January 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story a lot. It's probably one of my favourite on this site :).
person neie
schedule January 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WOW.
Loved it. All three. Absolutely amazing. I would say more, but speech seems to have deserted me for the moment.
WOW. O__O
Keep the InuxKago coming! (hehe)
person Inus_Kagome_Forever
schedule November 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awsome! Only read the first chap but can't wait to read more! Loved it! Absolutely loved it! Though at first I was afraid it was Sesshomaru! ::shiver:: I might have still read it but it's just better as Inuyasha! I/K Forever!

Laterz
Inus_Kagome_Forever
person luckyduckyt7oo
schedule July 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was a beautiful ending. Great story.
person ivy
schedule May 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i love love your story is very original and i was happy when inuyasha finally admitted that he
loved her too danm are you going to continue this story or are you going to end it here?
person binab86
schedule April 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow i loved this chapter. i hope you update soon
schedule March 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AWW. that was really really good. very well written and well thought out. i love the plot twists and the manipulation of certain characters. very well done. you really had a great flow put together with your words and really managed to capture each character to the depictions you set out for them. i was a little befuddled in the beginning as to how Yash and Kag knew eachother but you cleared that up nicely. i loved the ending and how...romantic??....it ended up being. for inu to admit he loved her and yet for her concious to be unable to hear...that is beautiful. also your word choices and description were right on the mark. you one saying "God can't help you now…you're dealing with a demon." was amazing. i have never heard something that sounded so raw and yet so sexy and dark at the same time. very well done. props to you. great story. honestly.
person julia
schedule March 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
cool