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for Forever In Love

by LAYNE

person kjc
schedule April 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
cool i love inu and kik fics kagomay is just trying to steal him away the skankateer.keep wityouryour doing great write now
person mike
schedule April 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
scrwe what all other people says sept me.inu and kik are good couples. i say fuck every one else sept me and keep writin
person Luna
schedule May 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Gramar Checks and maybe more description. Next time have someone read it, before you post it! But its not bad, just need some work
person Sayah1112
schedule April 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hey that was good cant wait till the next chap. update soon ^_^
person Angelofsorrows03
schedule March 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
pretty good!!! ^_~ luvvies so far!!!
person sarah
schedule March 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Usualy i dont read inuyasha and kikyo fics, and i dont like them that much either...im sorry but him making love to a dead girl is down right scary. Tho strangly enough i like your fic, it has promise to provide and intresting outcome and i cant help but wonder what will happen next. Though i think that next time u post a chapter have someone check your spelling and grammer, other than that it was perfect and i loved it. :) keep up the good work!
person NightDreamer
schedule March 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hey this is Moon Dream! Ya know! Roxanne! Everyone keeps beating me up! ;_; Whaa! They keep saying Miroku is a virgin! A lecher can't be a virgin! Whaaaaa! Tell them SUNY! Miroku is the hot sexy cartoon dude! Whaa! I wanna add onto your story, but those people made it go bye-bye! *bastards* Bye bye addition! bye bye..... bye bye.......
person aleahas
schedule March 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I don't know man...I really just don't like Kikyou aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh I'm glad she's dead...Ok thats it I'm done now I'm sorry if I offened you *sniffes* poor Kagome
person Roxy Baby
schedule March 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
If you don't know who this is, I'll give you three hints!! 1) I love to draw 2)I LOVE Miroku 3) I hate Kikyo! I mean, come on man!! She's such a fricken ho! She's just GAY!!t stupidupid @#!*$!! I'm 'unna kick 'er in the nuts! Please allow additions! I want to write in it too! See ya!

~ Bab Baby