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for The Mystic Scroll

by Babs

person The Black Kat
schedule September 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Thank you . . . thank you . . . thank you . . . now I can take more breaks from my research and statistics class that has me going crazy! I have enjoyed the story thus far and am impressed with your style of writing. I have enjoyed your last couple of chapters and am looking forward to reading the rest.

the black kat.
person The Black Kat
schedule September 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wow your good. . . another chapter up so soon! I thought I would take a break from my stats homework and see if there were any updates or new stories and there yours was, just looking at me saying come read me. . . But you left me hanging on the edge of my seat there! Ooooohhhhh another Kag/Sess story one of my fav. couples. I wish I could say that I had some stories for you to read, but I don't have the time to write any right now. Anyway, please keep up the good work & fast updates.

Ja! The Black Kat
person The Black Kat
schedule September 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM

yes. . . Different is good! I enjoyed this chapter and eager to read your next chapter! It helps ease the monotony of school & work.
Please update again soon!
schedule September 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey, you are very welcome for the review! This is a fabulous story--the last two chapters were evidence of that! I like how you're setting up the story with the mysterious voice whispering and capturing each of the players in the game. I was surprised to see Rin getting caught up in it as well, but she needs to be there. Also, Sesshoumaru sleeping in chapter 2 for four days was strange, but it moved the story along. Oh, I am so excited about this story! It's good!

I will definitely check back for more with this story. I also hope to read some of the other stuff you've got up on this site. I hope that you can read mine just to give me some general feedback on the chapters.

Keep writing!

Ciao! ^_^
person The Black Kat
schedule September 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow . . . this story is different from some of the others I have read. I am looking forward to your next update.
schedule September 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow... thi goo good right from the start. I'm definitely interested in where you go with this one. I really hope that you get more reviews--this story is fabulous! Keep going!

Ciao! ^_^