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for The Mystic Scroll

by Babs

person JeSsI
schedule December 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ok well all i can say is
iloveyouiloveyouiloveyou!!!
the story is great!!!!!!
your writing is awesome and the storyline is beyond that!!!
hhhhhhmmmm....and i just wonder who they happen to run in to!! lol!!
update soon!!!
person migele
schedule November 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
nice!
I liked the story.

poor kago and sesshou.
I wonder if they will manage to get term with their feelings...
maybe having Rain around will liven things up.
person Teresa
schedule November 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Babs! I really love this story! Your action scenes are great! Andove ove the way your'e putting Sesshy through emotional termoil. And I must say I am in love with his friend General Himari. He's about the only friend I would like to have in this story because he's not afraid to show his emotions. Easy to love I tell you! Keep on writing, It shows that you really love to. I Hope one day you would become a great Fantasy Fiction Stoyteller and they make your novel into a Movie. I could see this becoming one.
person Ralina
schedule October 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I'm captivated by your story! I absolutely love it! Please write more soon - I can't wait for Sesshoumaru and Kagome to be alone together with r ner new bond **snickers**. I hope it isn't long - since there IS an impending battle looming ahead of them... Please don't let us wait too long! Keep up the good work! Update soon please!

*Ralina*
person ANIM
schedule October 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love the story so far only one tiny itsy bitsy problem. Your formatting of the story; it goes to far to the right and to read I have to constantly click trrowrrow to the right then left when I have finished and it kinda makes me lose concentration. Maybe I am just silly or could you please let me know how to fix it on my computer--Computer iliterate. I love your fic and please keep writing.

thanks
person NightSky
schedule October 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great chappie, once again I couldn't stop reading! I'm always checking the site to see the updates and I ALWAYS check for yours! It's great and I hope you'll update soon!
person Annetta
schedule October 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This chappy was great just like the others! Keep up the good work! Also I would really like it if you notified my via e-mail when you update. Thanks! *hugs*
person Megan Consoer
schedule October 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
person The Black Kat
schedule September 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Once again . . .several great chapters. I must say I rather enjoy your battle scenes and what an imagination you have!
Please update again soon!

the black kat
person NightSky
schedule September 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Supperb story, hope you update soon! Things are getting pretty intense, please don't leave us hanging for long!!!*puppy dog eyes* Oh, and just one tiny thing I noticed in your text (please don't take this the wrong way): sometimes you you affect (verb) in the place of effect (noun). It's no biggie, just thought you ought to know, it only happens a few times, some of them in this last chappie. Hope you write soon!!!
NightSky