rate_review Reviews

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

That was truly great. I like the way you set up Kagome, strong and powerful without taking to much of the character away by not having her be rescude every single time. It is good sometimes to make her be the damsel in distress but they can go overboard with it which is stupid because not all woman are weak and fragil. i really hope you review soon. I'm going to check out your other stories and wait for this one. You'll probably hear of me again because you can be sure i will keep reading and posting reviews. And i hope you don't get too frustreded if you get a block but i'm sure that the rest of the story will be great. Oh and i really really liked the last chapter because sesshomaru is finally coming to terms with the bond and he will probably be faster to respond to his feeling of Kagome. I'm almost sure you are going to make rain do something that will get Kagome jelous because of her attentions to sesshomaru. I feel sorry for sesshomaru because he is going to suffer the wrath of Rain. Are you going to pair up Inuyasha and Kikyo or are you going to leave them alone. I'm actually glad that there isn't any real interaction between Kagome. Kikyo and Inuyasha because of all the junk and trouble that gets stuck with it. Well i hope you update soon and write more great chapters.
Bye.

OMG! I love this fanfic! It's hilarious! I adore Kagome's and Sesshomaru's first meeting and their *cough* comprimising positions, and her reaction to Jaken was funny too! The whole 'I am not a dog' thing was so ironic. I don't know how you can come up with such a awesome storyline. PLEASE I BEG YOU TELL ME YOUR SECRET TO YOUR GIFTS! LOL! No serious I love the storyline, the whole control factor that Sesshomaru's got to have over Kagome, and the fact that he's like a jealous little puppy, aww! And how many times has he tried to kill her? The whole exotic dancing senerio looks fantastic, and I can't remember all the other bits that I loved because I'm so happy! Anyway I LOVE THIS FIC! AND UPDATE PLEASE! AS I TOTALLY ADORE THIS FIC!!!

Ja Ne! Mwa!

TheSoulmater aka Holly

Amazing!! I love your story! Please post the next chap soon!!!!!!

Great. Love the way Sess is getting his buttons pushed every time he turns around, even when no one is trying to! You know it may be out of character but in a way it akes sense him losing control this way. I mean after a few centuries of ridgid self control something was bound to give. Also the stronger take charge Kagome is nicely done.

Very good lol i loved it

myoubi

OMG I LOVE THIS STORY!!! I STAYED UP ALL NIGHT READING IT... IT'S SOOOOOOOOOOO GOOD!!!!! I CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPPIE!!!! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!! ^.^

I Love You! Thank you for the Update! And Two Chapters! I know you love your viewers! I was just overjoyed! Anyway, I'm glad that Kagome is listening to her commrads and getting the needed rest. And our sweet little Rin is the calming factor between Sesshy and Kagome, boy do they need intervention! And in the next chapter, the other crew went off to war, Kagome and Rin stays behind. This little thing of the dancer intrigues me. Can't wait to read the rest. BUT...... I want you to have a Blessed Holiday, Peace to your family, and Love from me and mine.

Those were two great chappies and no worry's, if I get tired of checking I'll let you know!(lol) If you have any other questions like that, you can just put it in the A/N, I'm a beta for a friend and don't mind giving some pointers if they're needed! Update soon!! (mean cliffie...*snif*, you're so cruel!)
NightSky

now that is fun!
poor Kagome.
I think sess just found out that she even thinks about him when awake!
damm this is getting interessting.