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for You Look So Fine

by Danny

person drake220
schedule September 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
can you hear the crwod screaming, chanting a mantra? "two shot two shot two shot!!!'- i think they want another chapter too
person ME
schedule September 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ooh! Ooh!!! YES, PLEASE!!!!! *waves frantically* lemon over here!!! Great beginning--loved it--just needs a lemon to make it perfect, if I do say so myself ^_^ UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!.....please??
person black_n_pink
schedule September 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This story is great plz update !!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person sublimetrickster
schedule September 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very well written and enjoyable. I say go for the two shot if you can, I'm sure I'll read it.
person katt_jam
schedule September 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
this was great but ya it really need the lemon. please at least add that but I think you really should keep going .
person Forever_Illusi0n
schedule September 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMG I luved it! ::squeals:: Update it soon, cuz I just luv fics with Inu and Kag hookin' up in the club, Ima total trance/rave gurl all the way and these fics just go along with my interests. So I NEED MORE!! Blah! lol.
person Da Meza
schedule September 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
MAKE IT A 2-SHOT! Come on! I love it! We need some lemon action! ::nods::
::whisper:: TWO-SHOT.

Great Job.

-DM
person Kaye
schedule September 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
If you don't finish this I will hunt you down and hurt you! I don't make threats often, rarely really. But my goddess that was good. That was just really well written very good. Love it. Please continue!
person kagokitty
schedule September 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed this...ended really sweet and hot...hopefully there'll be more soon...?
much love,
=^-.~^=
person littlehanyou
schedule September 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Cool, the way you described what kagome and inuyasha were wearing made them sound really hot. Nice words, nice job