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for Faded Rain

by Mirokuslave

schedule September 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for reviewing! I'm constantly adjusting this fic to my reviewers wishes!
person drake220
schedule September 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
so sweet but i feel that ending could have had some added punch when you were listing the stats. just a line or two about love and what not. ignoring that, this was about damn near perfect
person ShAtTeReDgLaSs
schedule September 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
that was so sweet. Totally cool. I'm glad you did a great job. Good description and such. I loved it absolutly loved it!

person Paranoid
schedule September 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for fixing it. It was much easier to read. I enjoyed the story, it was sweet.