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July 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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April 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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September 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I'll say "Go Kagome! Ogling your neighbor isn't bad, its good! Very Good!" Another great chapter! Hope your not getting tired of me reviewing your story, but I love the idea ^__^
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September 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter. But why would Kagome's mother say that about Inuyasha? Can't wait for the next chapter. Keep up the great writing ^__^
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September 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Poor Kagome, to figure out that she shouldn't do that and something happens. Gooapteapter, slightly informing of Kagome's thoughts about her life as a pastor's wife. Is she going to go to college? What happened to make her pass out? Your doing a great job at writing and I hope you continue this story ^__^
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September 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
it s a good story so far but in the third last paragraph in the last chapter you said sam dropped to his knees. Who is sam? Please update soon.
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September 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I like how you had Kagome meet Inuyasha. And that Inuyasha's life is less than perfect. As for the length of the chapter, it seems fine to me ^__^. I wonder whats going to happen next ^__^ (Question that has been bugging me, Is Koga going to show up in this fic? And if he is, how is he going to react to Inuyasha?) Keep up the good writing ^__^
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September 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Good story Idea, but you might want to break up the first chapter into seperate paragraphs because its hard to read when its all bunched together. Anyway, How is Kagome going to meet Inuyasha? When they do get together, what will her family say? Will Kouga be a jerk? Same with Shippo. I hope you continue this because it seems interesting ^___^