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December 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i liked plz update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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January 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that is a great story, reminds me of an old fashioned romance. I love it, please continue!
L.A.
L.A.
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September 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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September 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Interesting...just remember to use proper spacing in between paragraphs. Other than that, you've got some good ideas with this story. Keep writing!
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September 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OH MY GOD WRITE MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!OOOOOOOO SO GOOD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!HEHEHEHEHEH SORRRY PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!^_^
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September 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OH. MY. GOD. ou dou don't update soon, I am going to perform suicide. Okay, I'm not really going to, but I'll do something that EVERYBODY will regret! Wait, no, that already happened in the form of my birth...
*rubs back of neck* Okay then! Moving on! PLEASE update soon! PLEASE!!
Bye! ^_^
*rubs back of neck* Okay then! Moving on! PLEASE update soon! PLEASE!!
Bye! ^_^
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September 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Good start, I look foraward to seeing where you're taking this story. You've got great description and a feel for the sensual. There were a few grr anr and spelling mistakes, along with a missing word here or there. Try going over your writing very slowly, sentence by sentence to be sure you haven't missed fixing anything after you've got it all down. Keep up the great work!
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September 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Soo we gonna get more?? Please???
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September 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Thats mean! Its seems like a sexy story fic!! I love it keep on keep on -gets on knees and begs- PLEASE Continue!!!
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September 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
you naughty tease! i want the rest!!! update!!