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HAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA...HAhHahHAhAHhahaa...

Yeah. You "own" him.

Poor fuck.

NO!0______0 need....second chapter PlZ I love it!!!

Wow... I thought Sesshomaru had issues but... Jaken is straight up Psyco. He went through all of that just to get skrewed by sesshomaru?! Like I said He don't have issues he a Psyco. I knew he was gay but wow... I'll bet Jaken loved that too... Great story...

=-O..that's the only thing i could've done after that..make a face..lol..REALLY good fic..but i dunno..maybe a bit of unexpected squick?...even though Sesshy was literally gone..he might've stopped if he knew who it really was lol

I shoulda freakin' known. Random youkai walking around and is TOTALLY green XP! .... This is a rather sad fic I'd have to say... cause... reaif Sif Sesshomaru ever KNEW about the fact that that WAS Jaken, I think he'd just have a heart attack and die! Though it would be humorous you have to admit.

Jaken: Sesshomaru-sama... you know that wonderer that you told me about in the woods?

Sesshy: What about it...? ::glare glare::

Jaken: ::blush:: that was... umm... me... ::pokes his little fingers together::

Sesshy: ::freezes in place, and eventually starts shaking::

hours later

Rin: What's wrong with Sesshomaru-sama? Jakken! What's wrong with Sesshomaru! he's been lieing down for hours mumbling to himself, and has been crying. JAKKEN! ARE YOU LISTENING?!

Jaken: ::gets a flower, starts picking little pettles:: He's gonna kill me, he loves, he's gonna kill me, he loves me... oh no! He's gonna kill me! ::runs away::

Though would be so terrble... and it would be such great blackmail for Inu-Yasha XD. I like your style, though I am curious as to why you put the little sceen change thing in there, un it it was just there for style. Course... I normally don't read this kinda stuff.. I was silly and desided not to read the description so it's my own damn fault 6.6;;.

::hears a loud thud in the back ground::

What the holly?

Rin: ::runs up to Trommy-Chan:: Sesshomaru-sama! He's DEAD!

Holy crap I was only kidding o.O;;!

Yuji: I absolutely loved this!
Yumi: Lemon was great!
Yuji: Please Please! I beg you continue this story! Please!
Yumi: Yes continue it! I want more of this
Yuji: please I'm on my knees! Please!
Yumi: PLease!
Yuji: PLease Please PleasePLeasePleasePleasePleasePleasePLease!!

-Coughs-

Woah?

WOAH?! He just.. Oh my gawd.. that was great.. though I wish the demon Sesshoumaru had raped was InuYasha. -FREAK-

XD

~Yaoi Kink

That was a real twister, even though I'm not into Rape fics, but it was still good. It was interesting that the green demon had no scent and I wondered about it. I should have known it was Jaken. I like sesshy too much to feel sorry for Jaken. That's sad, ne?

Great, I knew there was something coming at the end and that was just perfect.