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July 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I should've known it was Jaken all along... Green is my fav color though so I didnt think at all and wondering who that uke might be AT ALL. I think it was going to be an OC. Well... That end was shocking me... Though imagining Jaken to be a bishonen kinda prevented me from puking right out. Nice one, not to mention rape *hint* *hint* back there, btw!
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August 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hi,
I really like the your story, especially the twist at the end. I should have know who the green guy was from all the crying he did. Any way great story.
Take Care,
Pumpkinpi
I really like the your story, especially the twist at the end. I should have know who the green guy was from all the crying he did. Any way great story.
Take Care,
Pumpkinpi
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October 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
O_O Oh hell no. XD Jesus, you have a good way of intensifying the story! That came as a HUGE surprise! Shocking, but pleasant. LOL I hope you do another chapter. This was wrong and delightful at the same time! Loved the rape and how you describe Sesshy's feelings. Awesome! Great fic! I can't wait for more!!! ~thumbs-up~
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October 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*Blinks-falls off chair* Oh my!! Well that was different and quite resourceful of Jaken. ACK!! *Shudders* Lovely writing on this, and very original!!
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October 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Cough:Cough...ummm....cough:cough...wow...Jaken! I can't believe I didn't get it! Green, Terry, he was green. Man, if Sesshoumaru found out...Great fic!
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October 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
:: jaw drops in shock :: ohhh my god!!! oh my god!!! I guess Jaken got what he always wanted....LMAO
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October 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ohhhhh... that was goooood. never even saw it coming!! great job! i was like, "who has green hair and green skin???" damn good! if you made more chapters, i'd read em! ;)
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July 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!! you evil beast!!
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February 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
o_O wow....unbelievable
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February 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OH MY GOD!!!!!!!!! What a surprise ending I would have never guessed!!!!!!!!