rate_review Reviews

Here's my honest opinion on your story. I like this story. Its original, more detailed than any other stories that I've ever read. I've read every chapter and this is the first time I'm reviewing this story. Before you had the Sesshoumaru and Rin chapter, I read the sexual history of each character, and I really don't understand it and didn't care much for it. But other than that, I love the story. Thankyou for writing this story and I'll continue reading it (I'll just skim over the sex scenes, not because I don't like it, but because I'm just having a hard time picturing Inuyasha with other characters). ^__^

I'm enjoying the fic so far, but I have to admit that I find the biographies of the characters more interng tng than the current storyline. I suppose it's because the bios focus on the people, as individuals, while the story seems to focus more on the setting, meaning, this is Kagome's world and this is what goes on it. I must say that I DO like how the threesome became a foursome, and now, even that is becoming unstable. All apologies, but, in my opinion, Kagome was NEVER the correct female for Sess; he needs someone who's WILLING to play submissive to his dominant personality, and that's just not who Kagome is, as several of your fics have already proven.

I also like the alternative history you've set up for this fic, and I wonder what's going to happen at this parade. I hope there will be more interaction between the individual characters as the fic goes onke bke between Kagome and Inu, Sess and Kagome, Kagome and Kiyoko and Inu and Kiyoko. I realize the fic is supposed to be more about the alternate universe Kagome has established and what life is like in that universe, but keep in mind that the majority of the people who read fanfiction, read it to see familiar characters interacting with each other as they set off on an adventure of the author's making. As always, your descriptions are precise without being overly wordy, and you keep your characters true to their nature.

I look forward to your next update on this fic, as well as the next installment of "A Shard in Kyoto."

--theMaven :)

Great Chappie....hmmmm....wonder how Inu and Ses get along with Kagome's lovers....and how Kagome gets along with their mistresses. not nothing happens to hurt anyone else besides Kagome.....since she can protect herself the enemy might try attacking peoploselose to her in order to hurt her emotionally.

um, i don't mean to be petty or anything but is this a ses/kag? i know i know, it won't focus on the actual character romantic pairings but i'm curious

Nice start, and a good thing you reviewed a bit. Willp slp set the pace of the story line.

This should prove to be very interesting, Jeff.