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Well this story is interesting enough but what the hell happened between the end of Kagome's Return and the beginning of this one??? This is so weird with all the new stuff and not knowing what has happened just makes it more confusing. It would be super awesome if you could do a chapter or two just roughly outlining the first few years or so of their lives how they made that whole threesome thing work and sango and miroku and if kagome ever saw her family again. It seems like you were trying to do little history lessons in some of the chapters but without the whole story its just hard to understand. I don't know I hope I don't come off as being a flamer, just telling you what I think so far. I am still dying to know what Kagome has in store for her daughter the one with Sango's soul so hurry and post!!

Much love,
Lady Fluffy

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

I really really like this story and I am quite intrested to see where your going to take it. Never tone down the amount details you want to put in; they're what make you a really good writer and your stories incredible and hard to break away from. I just love the way you write, and in all of the stories that I read of yours.. you never take the plot where I think its going. Its never, ever predictable. I love that. I can't wait for more chapters to come out on this!

DUDE! FRIKING AWESOME!
Love your stoires, Jeffs. Long and have a great depth. You should consider a career in writing.

'Duty is heavier than a mountain, Death lighter than a feather'

Wasn't that from teh Wheel Of Tiem by Robet Jordan? Or soem japense cultural reference thing?

WRITE WRITE WRITE! Please. HAHAHA!

Thank you for your time.

SqurielLord

The characterization in your fics is perfect. I can easily see all the actions that each of them has taken throughout your alternate history.
The politics, however, remind me very much of Frank Herbert's Dune series- an existing heirarchy is toppled and replaced by an individual through a combination of personal power and religious fervor. However, can I turn your attention to a certain essay about this situation in another work of fiction? http://www.geocities.com/Paris/6790/truth.html
One can wander the fictional world of a CRPG with impunity once one has reached level 99, but in a real world every force must eventually meet a greater one.

This story bothers me in many, many ways. Kagome for one, while she was a utter Mary Sue in the first two installments, is now a completely unredemable one in Kagome: Goddess of Japan Secondly... Sesshoumaru stated in Kagome Where are you? that he couldn't abandon Rin because she called him "Papa" in her sleep. Which to me suggests a fatherly affection...Now he's married? her and fathered childern by her. While it's not actually incest, it's definetly emotion incest. Not cool. And honestly, is there anyone that hasn't fucked everyone? 500 years is a long time.. but.. geez.

Another point is, I don't see Sesshoumaru bowing to anyone. Even a "goddess". I'm all for A/U, but really this is closer to original fiction that anything that could be considered Inuyasha.

Interesting chapter. I've never thought of Heaven in quite that capacity, lol, and the thing with the tiles was very nice.

I love It So far. Write More Soon. I can't wait to read it

Ok. Is there anyway you can revive the Kagome/Sesshoumaru/Inuyasha triangle? Or at least mend the Kagome/Sesshoumaru relationship? Because, no matter what, they ARE consorts with each other, or at least lovers. And I would think that since Sesshoumaru and Kagome don't age the same way as humans do, their feelings won't change as quickly either. For example, a man might tire of his mistress for after a year or two, but that is taking into consideration he only lives seventy years or so. And, when they make their journey in 'Kagome! Where Are You' it gives me the impression that they have shared a very strong bond, one that, no matter how many Rins and dead Jakens appear, will not be broken, though tested.

poor Kagome...she really wants some time with Ses. Hope she gets some time with him (not a big Rin/Ses fan...sorry)
of course seeing her with Inu is good too. too bad about the upcoming war she will be very upset