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for Forgive me Father

by Lucifel

person D/H
schedule October 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Interesting and everything is just 'The Circle of Life'..If that's what your story is meant...

One problem thou..The grammar is pretty bad...

Other-wise, a very enjoyable read...Hope too see more..
person TheMysticalDragon
schedule September 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is by far one of the best Inu/Sesshy stories I have read. Keep up the good work!
person Blaze
schedule September 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Love the story I just need more of it lol because it was getting really really good..... keep up the good work ok lol and I will check up and see what you have updated so don't keep a person waiting lol kay
person Suicidal Skies
schedule September 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Fantastic update,I hope you keep it up!

Yuuum, Yuuum.
person Rawben
schedule September 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
how can i guess why the chapters are as they are? i dont even know why the title is misspelled! lol... great chapter! i'm excited for the next one!
person kit master
schedule September 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
honesty, tiquela, brightside, everdream. Let me guess..... you write the chapter, drink alot, think about the title, fall asleep, then give it the title in the morn?
person blacknoise
schedule September 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
billy talent.
person mcdgoddess
schedule September 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!! I LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOVE this story!!! Its funny, sad, and sweet all at the same time! Each chapter just got better and better! This is one kick ass, great story so far! I REALLY hope that you continue this story! Also will we learn what happens after Shippo fainted?
person Nanaka
schedule September 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay... i'm so glad you updated.... mostly cause i've wanted to re-read the story so far but couldn't cause i had forgotten the title and apparently didn't save it in my favourites, and i'm just too lazy to go searching for it again..... so i have 2 reasons why i'm happy you updated..... now i can put this in my favourites and also look forward to more updates.

Did any of that make sence to you.... cause i just read over it and i'm not even sure what i was talkin about.

Anyway.... great chapter, loved the story, will be waiting patiently for the next update
person Polka dot
schedule September 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Couldn't sessy recognize himby his smell? That's how Inu did, right?