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for Forgive me Father

by Lucifel

schedule November 18, 2021 at 12:00 AM

Why the ? Everywhere it makes no sense plese fix this problem 

person sma_orlando
schedule December 11, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Please finish this great story.
person natasha
schedule January 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
great story really loved it so much, that i can't wait for more.
schedule September 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
THIS IS AN AWSOME STORY!!!!!!! You need to write more! I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!



SesshysTrueMate1
person Lucifel
schedule July 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Already working on the next chapter ^_^
person nchsmi
schedule July 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh my goodness! Welcome back 2 this story stranger! I had 2 go back and reread this from the beginning, 2 get reaquinted w/ the plotline. I'm glad I did! Great chapter, keep up the good work, and please don't take so long in upd8ing next time.

Till then...B reading U!
schedule October 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Are you going to continue with this fic? I would like to know what happens in the end. Like who died and when.
person gen
schedule December 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
anything involving time paradoxes i eye critically
i am a Star Trek fan and i have always liked time travels
particularly when done well

i am sorry that this has not been updated for some time
the story shows a lot of character....
and many ideas for deep thinking, when one is inclined
i hope this fic has not totally been abandoned and the author is merely
at a crossroads of sorts
yes, life gets in the middle of things desired ... sometimes

.... i sincerely hope that the author finds the time, energy, and inspiration
to continue....

it is such an interesting fic, too.
person Virgo's Kiss
schedule January 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Cool story. Some mistakes here and there, but it happens to everyone. The idea you used for this story is kinda new to me, and I have to say I like the way you wrote it. And... ummm... the chapter titles. I swear i've heard them before and based on the hints.... are they quotes from songs of bands you like/have heard? I'm probably wrong, but if I am I guess i'll keep guessing. I can't wait for you next chapter!^^
-an anonymous reviewer a.k.a Virgo's Kiss
person Ano
schedule January 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i don't get the hints but i love the story