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by chevonne

person Spud
schedule September 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
New fic??? Where??? *starts bouncing up and down in chair* TELL ME!!!!!!! Wait a second, MORE lemony goodness!? You're kidding, right? I'm already halfway melted into a puddle of goo and you're telling me it's gonna get hotter??????????? JESUS CHRIST!!!!!!!! Damnit, if my cat collapses again, my six year old sister won't just THREATEN (is that spelled right?) me with a knife... yeah. Life is great, idn't it? Or what's left of mine... Update soon!!
person Fire Witch1 (@ ff.net)
schedule September 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That rocked! Please continue asap...lol, cute and with lemoney freshness! ::sips the rest of her tea and hands her one of the ever tasty toaster struduel with mini icing packet:: Always figured even if Inuyasha was half dog demon he had the stamina of a full one.

-Britt ^^ lalalalalalalalalal.....
person Spud
schedule September 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Fuck you. My A/C is on full force, and I'm still sweating like a pig, my skin is blackening, ( I told you I would burn to ashes by the time this fic was over, but the way this is going, it'll be before. ^_^ ) and my cat has cpsedpsed. I can just imagine explaining that to my kid sister when she gets back from her sleep-over. "Tomi, I was on the computer reading this fan fiction where my two favorite characters from my favorite TV show where fucking each other until they practically couldn't breath. It got so hot in here that the cat collapsed from heat-stroke. So when you grow up, and have sex until you can't walk, never have anything alive in your house. Don't even chance it with fish." Just beautiful. *rolls eyes* Oh shit.*freezes* She's just walking in the door. Wish me a HELL of a lotta luck. Even though you probably won't get this review on time. GASP! Review! Chappie was GREAT! And from this whole thing you probably know how hot it is. ~_^

P.S.- Did you laugh? And I actually said GASP! out loud. I love doing that!

P.S.2.- MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE!

person REDEYES
schedule September 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Did I miss something, because Inuyasha keeps saying "she disobeyed him" on the night he was human, what the hell did Kagome do???????
person hanyou-elf
schedule September 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
dum, dum, dumm! a hint of what's to come, ne? as always, a hot, sensual, seductive chapter and i can't for for the update. just to continue reading the story! (pervy me! ^.^)

so, about those private interviews... will you accept my resume? here it is (more like a small slogan for me) kinky kitty need some lovin'? we can practice all the things inuyasha does and then some... ^.~ will work for... food... ^.~

keep it coming! you rock sweetie!

kisses and groping hugs!
ja ne!
~hanyou-elf
person Spud
schedule September 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
God... Now I'm REALLY sweating. AND YOU CUT IT OFF!!! Although I have a pretty good idea why Inu-Yasha asked about yoga... *sadistic smirk* Dum dum dum!!! But it's so hot!!! *takes swig of water and wipes brow* God, I'm burning up! *looks at thermostat* Oh! No wonder! *gets up and turns heating down* But don't worry! The chappies still made me sweat. I swear they actually did/do. WITHOUT the heating! *glares at evil thermostat* And I'm sure the next chappie will be just as hot. Thogh I'm kind of afraid that by the time this fic is done, there'll be nothing lleft of me but ashes. ~_^

Chant: MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE!

Update soon! (Damnit! I took a drink of water, and I swallowed my gum! FUCK!! -_O)
person drake220
schedule September 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
is anyone else extremely jealous of kag right now??!?!??!?!??!!??!
I AM!!!!!!
damn all freakin horny things...........i want a man to say that to me you know? 'i want to make you scream'- hello?!?!?!?!? where are all the real (demi-demon) men?!??????? yeesh, fanfiction like this makes reality sex boring....
person sum1
schedule September 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hey ok that was hot!!! please update soon!
schedule September 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow.. it's not right to read and run.. and Neko doesn't read and run. Your ficcie.. wow.. Neko is speachless. Prettily written, keep it up. :3 Love and huggles to you!
person Spud
schedule September 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
It... It's so hot... I... I'm actually sweating... Dear god... Anyway, I envy Kagome. Inu-Yasha fucks her senseless while all I have for company are my two 6-year-old twin baby brothers. (not THAT kind of company you pervert! I baby-sit) But you know what? I made up a chant just for you! (well, maybe not just you... but you're one of the few...) I'm not sure if you remember it, but here it is!: MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE!

So... remember it? ~_^

P.S.-Update soon!