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for The Lucky Ones

by isilwath

person Mayoko
schedule September 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love this story i ve been reading it since day one, only i dont remember if i reveiwed(fanfiction.net). And now me and my friends have officaily decided you should become a novelist! You would do great and the way you ended the the story was so much better than alot of what i read in other stories because they seem to get bored by the end and loose their enthausiasium for it, or they just completley drop it. Well i can't wait for your next story i you another one and just incase you dont know this story has been taking of fanfiction.net
Bye,
Mayoko
person spyder
schedule September 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
this story kicked ass. i was completely hooked. dissapointed when it ended, i hope you have more stuff like that. keep up the awesome work.
person Atropa
schedule September 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
How could anyone even consider using words to describe this story. It was amazing, tremendous, F**ing great....
This is a story I would love to see as a movie... I love the way you made it work after the reunion. Amazing...
The feelings, the scenery.... *hey I already saw the movie...* You described everything beautifully...

This story goes on my Recommended List!!
person Spud
schedule September 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Okay, I just wanted to say something just in case you stopped looking for reviews after a while. (I'm not done the fic yet O_O) I'm in love with this fic. That's all there is to it. The plot, the way you twisted it all together, the way you end it, wich I know is going to be great, and everything else, starting with vocab. You have to write other fics, PLEASE! Iactually cried at the right parts. My mom asked what was wrong, but I couldn't tell her. Or else I'd be banned from computers for all eternity.O_o
PLEASE continue writing, PLEASE! Okay. I'll review as soon as I'm finished, so please wait for me. That's all for now. Bye-bye!

P.S.-From chapter Thirty-Four, about Canada, I just want to tell you this. I am a pure-bred, proud Canadian. You sound like you know a lot about Canada, so my question is, are you?(Canadian, though I'm sure you know this) Or not? I know I'm being reeeeeaaaaallllllyyyyy blunt about this, and you probably think I'm some psycho or something, but if you want to answer me, just e-mail me at toodles@rogers.com
Oh, and by the way, if you do, only e-mail me once, (though I'm not sure why you wouldn't) because my dad checks my e-mails. -_O Bye.
person WC
schedule September 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful! This was quite the epic - funny, sweet and heartbreaking. Congradualtions hon! ///_^
person Laurachan (too lazy to n).©n)
schedule September 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This was one of the most beautiful and wonderful stories I've ever read: I'm serious, no one have ever written a story so full of pain, love, sadness and happiness.
You just have to win something for this story! It was so moving that I often cried, and I'm not used to cry over a fanfiction. Your words entered my heart and will remain there for a long time, trust me.
And those chapter with sex were just a spicy addiction ^^

In the end, I loved this story and I'll recomend it to everyone ^^
Please, keep writing fanfictions, you REALLY are a very talented author... have you ever thought about writing a book? LO could be a perfect storyline, just without the Inuyasha characters, after all the plot is all yours ^^
person Michelle
schedule September 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This "epic" is one of my favorite stories. It is really great! Thanks!
person Atropa
schedule September 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WOW.... and I've only managed to read up to chapter 22 - how the heck have you managed to write all this??? Its huge.... and GOOD!! I wished I could write like you.... *I bow to you* I now it's late for me now and I got to get to bed.... not that I want to, but I must... I'll have to finish reading tomorrow....


person JewelesR
schedule September 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I'm so glad that you decided to put this story up on aff. I was reading it on ff.net when it was deleted. This story is very well written. It is very real and I could actually see it happening. It has taken me almost 2 weeks to read this far andis wis well worth the time!
JewelesR
A.K.A. Julie :)
person Persephone of Abydos
schedule September 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This was absolutely, without a doubt, the most beautiful fanfic I have ever had the pleasure of reading. I took two days straight to read it, simultaneously happy and sad when I finished reading the final chapter. I really, really, really hope you will continue to write stuff based on this story, because I just can't get enough. nk ynk you, thank you for writing such a wonderful story!!! ^-^