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This is, by far, one of the best fan fics that I have EVER read! Wonderful work!

umm, a lot of the chapters didn't upload completely or at all, could you please fix this?

This is a great story, but it is incomplete. Many, if not all, chapters have been chopped off roughly in half. I've no idea how that happened, but it might be do to technical issues. I've been reading this on MM.net, and I noticed the differences easily.

Love your story. I noticed that in The Lucky Ones you had Eri's last name as Bast. Would that have had anything to do with the Egyptian Goddess of the Cats, Bast or Bastet?

heyy there.. i just found this story on this site and was thrilled.. I was able to review and tell ya what i thought. I had originally found this story and read it on kokololio.com .. also on ur home page.. I fell in love with it.. It made me laugh histerically, aww in cuteness, and bawl my eyes out.. It was such a great story! I just wanted to let u kno that this story is my all time favorite story ever! Ive re-read it once already.. the story never gets old! lol .. Hell i think i even wrote in my profile that ur story was my all time favorite.. and copied the link to where its located at Kokololio.com hehe.. anyways Im also printing the full story out .. that way in case the website goes down for good.. or the story gets deleted or sumthin i'd still have a copy to be able to always read... its sooooooooooooooooooooo good! I love the Inuyoukai talking bit.. thats adorable! "Mother female, leader male hungry" .. "Pup good " ooo and i like the having to lick under the chin and stuff for forgiveness.. and all about the pack.. and how they threatened to kick yukio out of the pack when he was little when they turned their backs on him.. and he screamed and cried as if he were being killed.. YOUR STORY IS AWESOMEEEEE! I just wanted to let u kno what I thought! I hope u continue with The Coyote Child soon.. Its really good as well! Keep up the awesome work!

I love your story, and have read it several times. I just wanted to report a strange deletion of chapter 20. The chapter abruptly breaks from the doctor yelling to Ayumi in a spot you had not originally written. I just thought you'd like to know.

Absolutely wonderful story! I really do not come across other stories like this. I enjoyed every part of it except for some grammar errors...lol! But nobody needs good spelling to write a fabulous story! Your connection between Inuyasha and his eldest son and youngest dog youkai stood out so much for me. :) I appreciate a person who can tie in family aspects, romance, and a bit of action without making the story a mary-sue. Job well done!

very nice story.
so cute, just sad that the half demons had to be infertile.
however i had a lot of problems with the set up, it seemed as if the end of every chapter was cut out and sometimes parts of the middle of teh chapter were sliced and diced as well.

Amazing!!!!!!!!!!

It's the oly word that can describe your fic.
Usualy, normal pairings tend to go either boring or too unrealistic, but you managed to keep it in the right spot.
You kept each character's personality intact and this is no easy task

as we say it in french: Mon chapeau!
continiu the good work

What a beautiful fanfic u wrote. It took me a while to read it but it was well worth it in the end. This fic was truly touching and I'm glad that it had a good ending. Keep up the good work!