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person Aku Kitty 69
schedule February 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ooo, so you take requests? I'll have to e-mail you some time... anyways, good job with this story. Can't wait to read more chapters of its.

ta ta
Kitty
person Cammerz
schedule September 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow... great lemons. And since I'm a sick perverted freak... let's see. A Sesshoumaru/Kagome would be nice. Maybe an orgy or two. Or gang-bangs!!! O_o

Ok, you don't have to. But great story.
person Magnus Wolfbane
schedule September 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ok look..I used every code becasue every on of those is going to be used...i'm haveing my step sister write the m/m and m/m/m ones..also..This damn thig won't let me long on...So uh..until I get help....sorry
person Lina
schedule September 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
First of all, use the goddamn space bar.

Second of all, you don't need to put EVERY SINGLE CODE in the list in your summary...just the ones that really apply.

Otherwise, decent lemon. Nice job.
person ZoZe
schedule September 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very good first chapters!
I think now it's Inu's turn to get Kagome.
But if you're looking for a slightly crazy idea: ass Sesshoumaru to them. I'm sure it would be fun to read this!
person alixmm
schedule September 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Um... space bar??? You don't need to put every code in the summary just the onhat hat apply to your fic. You said you are a guy and don't beleive you could write ggg or gg but it is in your summary 'F/F,F/F/F' & FemSlash so if you are not going to write don't put it in the summary. Otherwise not a bad little fic I think Inuyasha needs to get the Kagome next time.
person serenyty
schedule September 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
continue!!!
person joey
schedule September 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Put some spaces in your summary so we can read it and Everybody Else's WITHOUT having to scroll left to right. Jeez..... how hard is it to press the spacebar???
person Space bar????
schedule September 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
SPACE BAR!!!! I didn't even bother to read the story I figured if youldn'ldn't use the space bar to type your summary then the story must be all run together!!! Keep in mind it the summary is messed up many people figure you can't write so they don't bother reading. And do you need almost every figgin' porn code besides doing it with aliens? Use only the ones that apply jeez!! And use the SPACE BAR!!!

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