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for A Modest Proposal

by AtariWings

person Jen
schedule October 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hey i love this story so far and i hope that you write more
person liz
schedule September 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WOW
What's his motive? I like the story, but that twist made it a little confusing for me.
I can't wait to read your next chapter.
Please update soon^_____^
person SP777
schedule September 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
okay you got my curiousity up. By the way that's atereteresting idea...the group becoming Exterminators.
person shaid
schedule September 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Certainly sounds intereating. Update when you can, please!
schedule September 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great introductory chapter; I didn't think it was too serious. So far everyone seems in character; except for Myoga, why would Inu Yasha's faithful if cowardly retainer scheme against his hanyou lord? Can't wait for more.
person szmadad
schedule September 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh no (fear in my voice)...please tell me that this is an Inu-Kag and you won't be putting them with other characters...for the love of god :)
I know, it's terribly childish but I can't stomach that pair with anyone else but each other. To me they are meant to be together...esp after going through so much.
Otherwise, you have a nice setup...but you're scaring me with the potential for the aphrodesiac to be used randomly....