rate_review Reviews

Not bad. But you might like to try
to slow down their relationship a
bit. I, personnaly, think they're
moving too fast. Anyway, update
soon!!!!!!

aww... kawaii chapter...

I like it so far.

Y'know...I vaguely recall the movie you're basing this on...but can't remember the end. For that reaon, I'm enjoying the character interactions and how you're building up the attraction between Inu and Kag. I also like the way you're describing Inuyasha's reactions to everything...it's kind of like he's a kid seeing and experiencing things for the first time.

In your story, as impossible as it sounds, I hope that Kagome and Inuyasha can get and STAY together....after all, it IS fanfiction and authors shoud be able to make anything happen, right? Can Inu "retire" from his duties to stay with her?

I just love them as a couple and want them to be together... at least in the realm of fanfics. :)

This story is the best not to bother but can you try to get the next chapter up soon. .......

cute! but you might want to seperate people's speech. update!

Interesting premise. InuYasha as the grim reaper, huh?

My only suggestion is start a new paragraph when you change speakers. It's hard to tell who's talking when if your paragraph is a jumble of quotation marks.

This is very interesting take on things. I don't think I've seen this one done yet and it has my interest that's for sure. I will be looking forward to your next chapter!