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for The Beast Awakens...

by Vyncent

person No Sugar Added
schedule September 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I like that! It's definitely a very different point of view. There should be more stories like this one out there. Everybody...this is my new role model.
schedule September 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey, this was interesting and fabulous! I likhe the two points of view conversing the way they were--it was extre wel well written. You're a fantastic writer!
person Dark Topaz
schedule September 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Can't wait for more
person Fate
schedule September 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Vyncent,

Yayayayay! I'm so glad you finally published this wonderful piece! It was even better reading it the second time. Love the artistry and the *grin* youkai teaching the inu...wanna see more! Much, much, much more! I'm posting a "Luv It" on my next chapter and urge to go read it. Wonderful, wonderful work and great touch with lemons!

Fate
person Tom
schedule September 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Okay
person Teresa
schedule September 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Good writing, good reading, enjoyed this story very much. Please keep up the good work.
person Anon
schedule September 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow... That was beautiful! I could ALMOST *wink* feel it...
I really liked the tenderness you put in there...
GREAT job!
person Naheta
schedule September 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wow thats a new take on the same story i like it is there going to be more??

Naheta
person blue_straberry
schedule September 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OHHHHHHH MYYYYYYYYY GODDDDDDDDDD!!!!!!!!!! YOU MAKE ME CRY, THAT WAS SO CUTE. LOVE IT!! ARE YOU GOING TO KEEP THIS STORY, FI SO PLEASE UP DATE SOON!!!

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