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for The Beast Awakens...

by Vyncent

person Tarn
schedule November 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Just a quick note. Love the development of Sesshoumaru and his beast. It flowed well together and built to a great anti climax. Would love to see what happened the following morning and everything from Kagome's perspective. Read your Unworthy one. This is a good story too. Well done.
person DArk Topaz
schedule November 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
what happened tp the rest of this one
person ChocolateHentai
schedule November 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM


Nice, I like tonceoncept. Noone has written anything like this....keep up the good work!:)
person D-dog
schedule November 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love Sesshy's iner beast he is such a kid or should I say pup :3
person YoukaiWithInMe
schedule November 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMG..LOL this was good!
Sessy with MPD..LOL
New twist on things, so well written!!!
person Liz
schedule October 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You should keep going! That was great! ::grins:: Loved the lemon. Very well done! How you continue!

With Much Love
Huggles
~Liz~
person CybrEmly01
schedule October 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*Glomps Vyncent* I love it. More please? *gives -cough- puppydog eyes*
Pretty please with caramel sauce?

CybrEmly
person Teresa
schedule October 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I reallly enjoyed this story.ook ook forward to more. I got a kick out of the conversation with dog demon's inner self. Keep on with the good writing!
person Anon
schedule September 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
kinda confzlin...da POV switchz were weird..but pretti gud..keep workin on it!
person Cassie
schedule September 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You must write more it was really good!

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