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for The Beast Awakens...

by Vyncent

person Diane
schedule January 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Too cute, more please.
person Kage (Kelsea Y.)
schedule December 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You are awsome! That story was cool. You should write more like that. I found it actually very funny. A true writer at work. I applaud your skills. Ja Ne

K.Y.
person Nem
schedule December 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
So extremely well written. Original, fun, enjoyable! Oh I love it :)
I like that it's written from one perspective only.. you did that very well.
Very very nice :)
person ka-chan
schedule December 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I was really surprised that I liked this fic as much as I did (I usually don't like mostly-first-person fics). I'm really glad I read it. I especially loved the dialogue between Sesshoumaru and his beast. By the way, I was just on fanfiction.net a little while ago, and someone named weretigress has this same fic up. I didn't know whether this was you, or a plagiarizer, so I thought I should tell you before I go insulting anyone. Anywho, I'll be looking for more of your writing since I thoroughly enjoyed this piece. Maybe there will be a sequel in the future...?
schedule December 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This was awesome. If this is a continous story, please up date it. I really enjoyed it!
person Flame_Fox
schedule December 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Someones got some personality disorders...o0;.lol Well, i hope to read more of this, or... more of your work, though, i think, you should make it so Kagome talks to..o0;..cause Sesshou talking to himself is starting to freak me out....its like Golem...Talking to him self.."They stole our Precious!!!" lol "Nasty Hobbits!!" "We be Good! We be Good!!!" "It BURNS Usss!!!" lol...im having fun. lol So yeah, Make Kag speak..or something....cause like i said.... FREAKY!!>< Its a sexy version thats not so insane of Golem. lol But i LOVE the Kagome/Sesshoumaru pairing, my fav!!!! My friends say im a stupid bitch... that Rin and Sesshou are better, i think i gave my friend a bloody lip for that.....cause im not stupid! I just dont think all the time! **pouts** But...i have split personalities too.....o0;.... Tina once kicked a boy in the nuts, he didnt come back to school till two years later, and he's got a limp, that will NEVER go away....**grins** funny... So yeah, KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!!! Ja ne!!!
person LadyRainStarDragon
schedule December 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Super.

It was so well written!

Wish I could write a sex scene that well.
person unvoicedsigner
schedule December 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
that was very good you really should write that into a story
it would be a very very good story i must say
so good luck and happy holidays


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^_^:i do think that was a good story
-_-:your just being a kiss up
^_^:am not!!
-_-:are!!
^_^:not!!
o_o:will both you shut up!!
-_- ^_^:NO!!
o_O:ok
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good luck and good bye
person Cassie
schedule November 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Really good fic I like it very much. Can't wait to read chapter 2, don't keep us waiting long ok.
person DarkMystic
schedule November 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is a great story, but the first person perspective, atleast thats what I think it is, it confuses me. Its nice,but I think if it was in third person, it would of been better.